2024届高考英语读后续写爱心故事类+帮助失去妻子的人走出阴影课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 爱心故事——帮助失去妻子的人走出阴影 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 He was there every morning, sitting motionless on the front stops of his house. His bright blue eyes seemed so distant and sad. Every morning, I walked this route with my daughter to her kindergarten. We were new to the neighbourhood, so I didn’t know many of my neighbours. On one beautiful morning, as we passed his house, my daughter piped up and called out to him, “Hi, Mr. Man!”She was an outgoing girl, and I wasn't surprised at her cheerfulness, but her enthusiasm soon faded when the man didn’t look at her or say ‘Hi’ back. As we continued on our walk to school, my daughter asked why the man didn’t want to say hi to her. Stumbling for words, because I didn’t have the answer, I said simply, “Maybe he is having a bad day.” Once back home, I tackled the breakfast dishes, and I thought about Mr. Man.What was his story? Why did he seem so sad?1 wanted to do something to cheer him up. I thought of a few ways to make his day a bit brighter, but nothing seemed special cnough. 4 4 续写原文 The next morning, after dropping my daughter off at school, I saw one of my other neighbours tending her front garden. After I introduced myself, she invited me in for a chat. She was a long-time resident of the neighbourhood, who knew everyone and everything. She was a bubbly personality, but when I asked her about the man who lived nearby, she grew serious. Bob recently lost his wife in a car accident. He hasn’t been the same since. The following week seemed to fly by. I had talked to my daughter about what we could do to make Mr. Man smile. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1: With every suggestion l made, she simply said “No, not that.” Parsgraph 2: Inside, in perfect calligraphy, it simply read, “Thank you, from Mr, Man.” 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 8 8 续写思路分析 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的邻居鲍勃最近在一次车祸中失去了妻子。从