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第二板块 写作系列专项提能 层级（一） 欲保分数·先防错误 如果一篇文章中有较多的语法错误，即使词汇再亮、句式再高，也 只能是欲盖弥影、难掩其丑，将直接被打人低分“冷官”。“欲想得高分， 3招教你有话会说、“地道”表达 先保基本分”。所以，我们先从写对句子学起。 第1招表达正确 规避常犯的9大错误 考生写作中常犯的错误主要表现在词性不明，措辞不当、用法不妥，重复累赘，句法混乱、中式英语、拼写与标点 错误等。下面通过整理归类，列举正误例句，指出错误所在，总结其规律，以便帮助考生尽快提高英语书面语言的准确 表达能力 一、词性不明 正：Finally we were shown around the 误：Those who strongly against the idea think playground at the far back of the school, animals will lose their freedom and nature if where there were some boys having a football caged in the zoo. game. 正：Those who are strongly against the idea 分析：此处have作非谓语，应用ing形式表示主动 think animals will lose their freedom and 关系。 nature if caged in the zoo. 四、重复累赘 分析：误将介词作动词：against(反对)是介词而不是 误：The moment when I think of my motto, 动词，用介词表达动作意义，要加系动词be:for为 I'll become energetic and devote myself to 其反义词，意为“同意”。 二、措辞不当 what I'm doing. i误：Under the help of my classmates and: 正：The moment I think of my motto,I'll teachers,I managed to make up for the become energetic and devote myself to what lessons I had missed. I'm doing. 正：With the help of my classmates and 分析：the moment/minute/instant.,或each/ teachers,I managed to make up for the every/next/the first time.:,等名词性短语作从属 连词引导时间状语从句时，其后不再接when, lessons I had missed. 五、句法混乱 正：Thanks to the help of my classmates and 误：Though it took us some time to help him, teachers,I managed to make up for the but we were happy anyway. lessons I had missed. 正：Though it took us some time to help him, 分析：思维方式差异：“在…的帮助下”实则是“由 于…的帮助”，under常用于“under the we were happy anyway. leadership/protection of...". 正：Though it took us some time to help him, 三、用法不妥 yet we were happy anyway. 误：Finally we were shown around the 分析：汉语复合句的关联词语要求完整，但英语复合 playground at the far back of the school,where 句中的从属连词和并列连词不可并用，否则句子的 there were some boys had a football game. 类型无法确定。“because·,s0..”亦属此类。 332 第二板块写作系列专项提能 六、中式英语 o:注意：1.词数100左右： 误：Grandpa is in his eighties,but his body is 2.可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯。 healthy. [学生习作] 正：Grandpa is in his eighties,.but he is in:l Dear Peter, good health.