内容正文:
Module 8 话题写作——意外事故
【写作任务】
假如你是学校英语网站的记者,请你根据下面提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的事故报道并发表你的观点。
Date
Friday,15th July
Place
in the playground
Who
Lily
What happened
taking a walk with her friend;some boys playing football;hit her on the head;hurt her arm;was sent to hospital
【审题谋篇】
主题
An accident report
内容
What happened
※Lily was taking a walk with her friend;
※Some boys __were__ __playing__ football excitedly;
※The ball hit her and her arm __hurt__;
※Lily was sent __to__ __hospital__ at once
Opinions and advice
※Be __careful__ when walking in public places;
※Pay attention to the __people__ and things around
目的
Learn about how to keep safe
主要人称
第三人称
主要时态
一般过去时
【句式升级】
1.当我正在过马路时,一辆车突然撞到了我。(使用本模块所学的过去进行时态来翻译)
I was crossing the road when I was hit by a car suddenly.
2.汤姆从树上跌下来并伤到了右腿。(使用本模块所学的fall off…短语来翻译)
Tom fell off the tree and hurt his right leg.
3.一场可怕的火灾发生在了我朋友身上。(使用本模块所学的happen to短语来翻译)
A terrible fire happened to my friend.
1.What was worse,it began to rain heavily.
更糟糕的是,开始下大雨了。
2.All of a sudden,a bicycle ran against her at a high speed.
突然,一辆自行车高速撞上了她。
3.You cannot be too careful in driving a car.
开车时再小心也不为过。
4.Caution is the parent of safety.
小心驶得万年船。
5.Safety first!
安全第一!
【妙笔成篇】
One possible version:
On Friday,15th July,something terrible happened to a girl called Lily in the playground in our school.
It was sunny and Lily was taking a walk with her friend.A group of boys were playing football there while Lily was passing by.Suddenly,the ball hit her on the head.As a result,Lily fell onto the ground and hurt her arm.Immediately,she was sent to hospital and she had to stay there for a week.What a pity!
Safety always comes first.No matter where we are,we should be careful and pay attention to the people and things around all the time.
【写作加餐】(选做)
假如你是Mike,昨天放学的路上,你的好朋友John发生了一起交通事故。请你以“A Terrible Accident”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,描述事故的发生经过并呼吁大家注意交通安全。
参考词汇:ride;hit;drive off;fall off;hurt;call 120;the ambulance;pay attention to
One possible version:
A Ter