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Module 8 话题写作——意外事故
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【写作任务】
假如你是学校英语网站的记者,请你根据下面提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的事故报道并发表你的观点。
Date Friday,15th July
Place in the playground
Who Lily
What happened taking a walk with her friend;some boys playing football;hit her on the head;hurt her arm;was sent to hospital
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【审题谋篇】
主题 An accident report
内容 What happened
※Lily was taking a walk with her friend;
※Some boys ___________ ___________ football excitedly;
※The ball hit her and her arm ___________;
※Lily was sent ___________ ___________ at once
Opinions and advice
※Be ___________ when walking in public places;
※Pay attention to the ___________ and things around
were
playing
hurt
to
hospital
careful
people
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目的 Learn about how to keep safe
主要人称 第三人称
主要时态 一般过去时
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【句式升级】
1.当我正在过马路时,一辆车突然撞到了我。(使用本模块所学的过去进行时态来翻译)
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2.汤姆从树上跌下来并伤到了右腿。(使用本模块所学的fall off…短语来翻译)
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3.一场可怕的火灾发生在了我朋友身上。(使用本模块所学的happen to短语来翻译)
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I was crossing the road when I was hit by a car suddenly.
Tom fell off the tree and hurt his right leg.
A terrible fire happened to my friend.
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1.What was worse,it began to rain heavily.
更糟糕的是,开始下大雨了。
2.All of a sudden,a bicycle ran against her at a high speed.
突然,一辆自行车高速撞上了她。
3.You cannot be too careful in driving a car.
开车时再小心也不为过。
4.Caution is the parent of safety.
小心驶得万年船。
5.Safety first!
安全第一!
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【妙笔成篇】
One possible version:
On Friday,15th July,something terrible happened to a girl called Lily in the playground in our school.
It was sunny and Lily was taking a walk with her friend.A group of boys were playing football there while Lily was passing by.Suddenly,the ball hit her on the head.As a result,Lily fell onto the ground and hurt her arm.Immediately,she was sent to hospital and she had to stay there for a week.What a pity!
Safety always comes first.No matter where we are,we should be careful and pay attention to the peop