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牛津深圳版九年级上学期期中复习 查缺补漏冲刺满分
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专题08 期中必考单元话题满分范文20篇(广州专用)
一、电子邮件
1.(2022秋·广东广州·九年级广州科学城中学校考期中)Betty在生活中遇到了问题,父母都忙于工作,没有时间陪她。Betty认为父母根本不爱她。她很伤心,所以她给某青少年杂志的专栏Linda’s Advice Column写信,向Linda寻求帮助。假如你是Linda,请你根据以下内容提示,给她写一封回信,提出一些建议。
1. 试着理解父母:并非不爱你,只是忙着挣钱养家。
2. 帮着做些家务活,能体验共处的乐趣,关系更密切。
3. 遇到困难多和父母聊聊,学会跟父母分享你的感受。
4. 其他建议(至少两点)。
要求:
1. 词数:80左右(信件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
2. 适当发挥,内容充实,结构完整。
Dear Betty,
I’m glad to receive your letter. In fact, you’re facing a common problem, and there are some things you can do to solve it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Linda
【答案】例文:
Dear Betty,
I’m glad to receive your letter. In fact, you’re facing a common problem, and there are some things you can do to solve it.
To begin with, try to understand your parents. Instead of not loving you, they’re just busy earning money to support the family. What’s more, helping with the housework not only can bring you lots of fun for being together but also makes your relationship even closer. In addition, you’d better talk to your parents and share your feelings with them when you get into trouble. Most importantly, you have to keep in mind that your parents will always love you. Last but not least, you must learn to be independent enough not to rely on your parents to do everything for you.
Hope my advice will help you out and make you feel better.
Best wishes,
Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:明确主题,围绕主题给出合理的解决问题的建议,不要遗漏要点内容,并且在列举建议时注意衔接词语的使用,使前后过渡自然,行文流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,提到上封邮件所了解到的问题,进而引出话题和写作意图,即提出应该如何做。
第二步:具体陈述解决问题的建议。根据要点内容从不同的角度或方面提出具体的做法,并且补充自己的建议。
第三步:进行总结,表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①to begin with首先
②ge