Welcome Unit Section Ⅴ Writing—An individual resume-【精讲精练】2023-2024学年高中英语必修第一册人教版(教师用书)
Section Ⅴ Writing—An individual resume
个人简介是写作中常见的形式之一,其主要内容为简单介绍人物的姓名、年级、性格、最喜欢的学科、学习方法、爱好及对未来的打算等。个人简介要求语言简洁,重点突出,条理清晰。
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Ann,15 Lakeside High School USA My name is Ann Wells and I'm a Grade 10 student at Lakeside High School.I'm an active person and I love sports. (文章开篇介绍自己的相关信息) I'm curious about everything.I often ask questions,but I learn best by doing. (学习风格) My favourite subject is physics.Dancing and skating are my hobbies,and I also like to read short stories. (喜欢的课程及爱好) I plan to become an engineer in the future. (未来计划或梦想) Thando,16 South Hill High School South Africa I'm Thando Gowon.I'm 16 this year.I come from South Africa.I'm a Grade 10 student at South Hill High School. (文章开篇介绍自己的相关信息) I look good,think fast,and play hard.You'll never see me without a book or a pen.If I'm not in class,I'm either in the library or in the computer lab. (学习风格) At the weekends,I | [文章结构] 说明: 把个人小档案改为个人简介 [相关词句] 1.词汇 (1)外貌 goodlooking面容姣好的 pretty 漂亮的 ordinarylooking相貌一般的 strong 强壮的 handsome帅气的 tall 高个子的 (2)性格品质 active积极的; 主动的 outgoing外向的 lovely可爱的; 活泼的 bright聪明的 kindhearted心地善良的 humorous幽默的 patient耐心的 (3)兴趣爱好 hobby嗜好 be crazy about热衷于 be interested in=show interest in对……感兴趣 be fond of喜欢 be devoted to致力于 2.句型 (1)出生 I was born in Shanghai on May 6,2004. (2)特长爱好 ①My favourite subject is English. ②Reading and singing are my hobbies. |
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play computer games if I'm not busy studying. (个人爱好) My dream is to start my own IT company! (未来计划或梦想) | ③I am interested in/love/like playing chess. ④He is good at sports,such as running,football,basketball,and table tennis. (3)计划或梦想 ①My dream is to start my own company. ②I plan to become an astronaut in the future. (4)人物评价 ①He is always willing to help others. ②Students spoke highly of him and all respected him. |
请根据下面的提示写一篇题为“My New English Teacher”的短文。
1.李老师年轻、漂亮、热情、有活力;
2.讲课清楚,有耐心,总是鼓励我们;
3.她教我们刚刚两个星期,但已经成为最受我们欢迎的老师。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[审题谋篇]
第一步:明确要求
该写作属于应用文中的个人简介,人称应该用第三人称,时态为一般现在时。
第二步: 确定段落
第一段:指明要介绍的人是谁——我的新英语老师李老师;
第二段:详细描述李老师的性格特征、优点;
第三段:介绍李老师对我们的影响及我们对她的喜爱。
第三步:提炼要点
1.impression 印象
2.enthusiastic 热心的
3.full of energy 精力充沛
4.be very patient with 对……非常耐心
5.encourage 鼓励
6.avoid 避免
7.embarrassed 尴尬的
8.make mistakes 犯错误
9.active 活跃的
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