Unit 2 Section Ⅴ Writing—A travel plan-【精讲精练】2023-2024学年高中英语必修第一册人教版（教师用书）
Section Ⅴ Writing—A travel plan
旅行计划类的书信要求我们针对旅行的地点、时间和出行方式等进行准确的描述，学生应该注意描述的重点和顺序。在写作过程中力争做到：紧扣主题； 句子结构完整； 信息内容准确； 篇章结构连贯。
课文展示 | 写作手法 |
Dear Xiao Li， My time here in China is going well.I love my new school and classmates.Over the October holiday，my parents and I are planning to go to Xi'an to see the Terracotta Army. (开门见山，表明假期旅游计划) I've heard that it is an amazing sight，and I can't wait to go.To me，the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable.It's amazing that there are more than 8,000 statues，and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s.(介绍西安兵马俑景点) | [文章结构] 旅行计划
[相关词句] 1．词汇 (1)介绍旅游景点/线路 ①places of interest 名胜古迹 ②a tourist attraction 旅游景点 ③an amazing landscape 令人惊叹的风景 ④a sevenday trip 七日游 ⑤package tour 包价旅游 (2)有关“旅游”的动作 ①take a tour 游览 ②set out/off 出发 ③go sightseeing 观光 ④leave for 动身去 ⑤enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景 (3)交通方式 ①by public transport 乘公共交通 ②by flight/boat 乘飞机/坐船 ③on foot 步行 |
【We're also planning to visit several other places in Xi'an.My dad and I are both | 2.句型 (1)开头句式 |
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looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum，because my dad loves history and I have heard that this museum is known as a “Chinese treasure house”！We're also going to the Xi'an City Wall and a few other famous sights.】 (旅游其他计划) 【We're taking the train，leaving the day before the October holiday begins.We're arriving at 9：30 a．m.and will start sightseeing right away，so I hope we sleep well on the train！】(出发时间、交通方式) I guess that's all for now！I'll write again soon and send photos！Do you have any plans for the coming holiday？Hope to hear from you soon.【表达自己的想法和对对方的期待】 Your friend， Richard | ①I'm writing to share my travel plan with you. 我写信与你分享我的旅行计划。 ②Over the holiday，my parents and I are planning to go to England. 假期期间，我和爸妈计划去英格兰。 ③You have asked me for some information about my travel to Germany.你询问我关于去德国旅行的一些信息。 ④The schedule and details are as follows. 时间表和细节如下。 (2)正文句式 ①I'm planning to travel to Suzhou，a city called Eastern Venice. 我计划到苏州旅游，它被称为东方威尼斯。 ②The May Day is coming/approaching/around the corner，and I am going to travel to Shanghai to admire its beautiful scenery.五一就要到了，我要去上海欣赏它美丽的风景。 ③You will be amazed at the beautiful scenery there. 你将会惊讶于那里美丽的景色。 ④We are going to the destination by highspeed train. 我们将乘坐高铁去目的地。 (3)结尾句式 ①The Forbidden City is really worth your visiting.Looking forward to your coming. 紫禁城确实值得你参观，期待着你的到来。 ②I hope you will have a trip with me.我希望你和我一起旅行。 ③ I believe we'll have a good day.我相信我们将会度过美好的一天。 |
假定你是校学生会主席李华，学校安排你下周末作为导游带领外籍教师Mr Smith进行一次近郊游。请你用英语给Mr Smith写一封电子邮件，包括以下内容：
1．自我介绍；
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2．出游的时间、目的地等信息；
3．需要提前做的准备工作。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Smith，
I'm Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union of our school.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[审题谋篇]
第一步：明确要求
该写作属于应用文，人称应该以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
第二步： 确定段落
首段：引入话题
中段：旅行计划细节：(①出游的时间、目的地等信息； ②需要提前做的准备工作)
尾段：表达期望
第三步：提炼要点
1．act as a tourist guide 当导游
2．schedule 时刻表
3．details 细节
4．have a wonderful and wellorganized trip 有一个美好而有条不紊的旅行
5．be amazed at the scenery and surroundings 惊叹于风景和周围环境
6．wear a pair of sports shoes 穿一双运动鞋
7．have a good day 一天都有好心情
第四步：句式升级
1．我很荣幸下周末担任你的导游。(一句多译)
(1)I feel it a great honour to act as a tourist guide for you next weekend. (it作形式宾语)
(2)I feel/am honoured to act as a tourist guide for you next weekend.
2．我们将会有一个精彩的和精心安排的旅行，你会被那里的风景和周围的环境所惊艳。
(普通表达) We'll have a wonderful and wellorganized trip.You will be amazed at the scenery and surroundings there.
(高级表达) We'll have such a wonderful and wellorganized trip that you will be amazed at the scenery and surroundings there. (such...that 合并升级为状语从句)
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