Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing—A letter of advice-【精讲精练】2023-2024学年高中英语必修第一册人教版(教师用书)
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Section Ⅴ Writing—A letter of advice
建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告的一种文体。写信时要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由,提出的理由要合情合理,语气要委婉和缓。
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写作手法
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend,Chen Lei.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. (指出对方的问题,提出建议的原因)
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.(说明了网瘾的害处)I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together?(提出解决问题的建议) I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.(表达希望)
All the best,
Susan Luo
[文章结构] 建议信
[相关词句]
1.词汇
(1)senior high school 高中
(2)choose a curriculum/course选择一个课程
(3)set a goal设立目标
(4)behave well/badly表现挺好/不好
(5)develop a good relationship建立好的关系
(6)take an active part in积极参加
2.句型
(1)段首句
①It is a pity that I hear the bad news.
我很遗憾听到这个坏消息。
②I am sorry to hear that you have some difficulties in adapting to the new school life.
听说你在适应新的学校生活方面有些困难,我很难过。
(2)主体段落句
①I recommend you to (=I recommend that you)/You had better join different clubs so that you can make new friends.
我建议你/你最好加入不同的俱乐部,以便交到新朋友。
②It is helpful for you to do this thing.
做这件事是对你有帮助的。
③You don't have to worry too much about it.
你不需要过多担心这件事。
(3)段尾句
①I think you can make it if you follow the above advice.如果你听从以上建议,我认为你会成功的。
②I believe that if you follow my advice,you'll get along well with your classmates.
我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你将会和同学们相处得很好。
假定你是李华,你的好友彼得进入高中后不适应高中生活,情绪(mood)低落,丧失信心,请你根据提示给他写一封电子邮件,鼓励他努力学习。内容包括:
1.确定学习目标;
2.处理好与同学的关系;
3.积极参加学校活动。
注意:词数80左右。
[审题谋篇]
第一步:明确要求
该写作属于建议信,人称应该以第一人称和第二人称为主,时态为一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
第二步