Unit 3 Section 5 Writing a sports story-【赢在微点】轻松课堂2023-2024学年新教材高中英语必修第二册（外研版）

Section 5　Writing a sports story 题型解读 谋篇布局 叙事类记叙文在新高考题型中多以日记、报道或书信形式呈现,在写作中应完整地介绍清楚某一事件的经过,理清事件的5个W(when, what, who, why, where)和1个H(how), 条理清晰,内容全面 首段:叙述事情发生的背景、目的等 主体段落:叙述事情的经过 尾段:发表感想或心得体会 积满分佳句 　 ■ 夺人眼球开头句 1.The first time I took part in jogging, I fell in love with the sport.我第一次参加慢跑,就爱上了这项运动。 2.Before I knew it, I took up swimming and I found it quite fun.不知不觉中我开始游泳,并且发现游泳很有趣。 ■ 亮点出彩篇中句 1.In order to win the competition, I must get fully prepared and practice hard.为了赢得比赛,我必须做好充分的准备,努力练习。 2.I like yoga since it helps me to keep fit and calm myself.我喜欢瑜伽因为瑜伽帮助我保持健康并且让我平静。 3.I never thought I could win first place in the running race.我从未想过我能在赛跑中获得第一名。 ■ 韵味无穷结尾句 1.It is the most exciting moment that I have experienced.这是我经历的最激动人心的时刻。 2.I really had a great day taking part in the running competition.参加跑步比赛使我度过了愉快的一天。 3.I was really proud when my team won the volleyball competition.当我的球队赢得排球比赛时,我真的很自豪。 练写作规范 　　假定你是李华,上周参加了学校运动会。请你根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你此次参加学校运动会的经历。要点包括:1.你的角色;2.参与过程;3.你的感受。 注意:写作词数应为80左右。 第一步:认真审题　谋篇布局 体裁 人称 时态 要点结构图 首段 叙述自己所参加的运动会项目 应用文(周记) 第一人称 一般过去时 主体段落 1.比赛一开始的心情 2.赛跑过程中自己的努力 3.比赛结果 尾段 表达自己的感受 第二步:斟词酌句　靓化表达 1.我一直积极参加学校的体育活动。 I􀆳ve been actively involved in the sports events in my school.  2.上周五,我参加了一年一度的运动会的跑步比赛。 Last Friday, I entered a running race during the annual sports meet.  3.面对十五个强大的竞争者,我感到紧张,因为我认为很难赢得第一名。 Faced with fifteen strong competitors, I felt nervous since I thought it hard to win first place.  4.一听到起跑信号,所有的赛跑者都跑起来了。 At the sound of the starting signal, off went all the runners.  5.我竭尽全力跟上他们。 I did everything in my power to keep up with them.  6.几分钟后,我不知不觉地成了跑得第二快的人。 Minutes later, before I knew it I became the second fastest runner.  7.凭着坚强的意志,我第一个到达了终点线。(不定式短语作后置定语) With strong will, I was the first to reach the finish line.  8.尽管我很累而且满身是汗,但我从未感到如此自豪和快乐。 I was tired and sweaty, but I had never felt so proud and happy.  →Although I was tired and sweaty, I had never felt so proud and happy. (让步状语