Unit 6 Section 9 Writing an ending to a story-【赢在微点】轻松课堂2023-2024学年新教材高中英语必修第二册（北师大版）

Section 9　Writing an ending to a story 题型解读 谋篇思路 续写故事结尾,是指在读懂故事后,根据故事人物和人物关系,进行合理设想。在续写故事结尾时,多关注动作描写和心理描述,注意续写部分应保持情节的延续,且与故事主旨和叙事意图一致 第一步　理通原文已知信息 第二步　梳理原文两情线 第三步　以旧带新两情相悦 第四步　增加细节涉笔成雅 满分续写技巧 　 第一步　理通原文已知信息 1.通读原文,勾画有助理清文章脉络的词汇或句子,弄清谁(who)、在何时(when)、何地(where)、如何(how)、做了何事(what),从而归纳主旨,推断主题。 2.确定故事的人物,通过分析人物的动作、心理、对话等判断人物性格和情感变化。 3.留心原文结尾或续写第一段首句是否出现一个冲突或问题,在续写部分应解决该冲突或问题。 第二步　梳理原文两情线 1.梳情节线:利用时间和地点的变化明确故事的开端、发展、高潮和结局,从而梳理情节的发展。 2.理情感线:通过情感形容词、副词、名词或介词短语等判断情感或通过动作、神态、心理或场景描写等推断人物情感变化。 第三步　以旧带新两情相悦 1.以旧带新:由原文和首句已知信息推段续写部分未知的细节,使续写部分情节合理,才能与原文情境融洽度高。 2.“两情相悦”:续写部分的情节线和情感线的发展应与原文两情线连贯融洽,尾句应体现正能量,可呼应原文总结、感慨、点题或升华主旨。 第四步　增加细节涉笔成雅 续写部分的语言特点保持与原文语言特点的一致,增加动作、情感、心理活动等的细节描写,表达流畅自然。 练写作规范 　　阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My story is about my mother􀆳s beautiful ball gown (舞裙). She had carefully wrapped it in paper and placed it in a cardboard box and it was hidden away in a top cupboard. From time to time it would be lifted out of its box and shown to us, and as small girls we would imagine the day when we might be allowed to try it on. That never happened. The top cupboard where the dress was stored happened to be in my bedroom. One day when I was around the age of nine or ten, I was very anxious to try it on. I quickly pulled the gown over my head. My mother􀆳s waist (腰) must have been extremely tiny as it fitted my waist with little room to spare. Suddenly, I realized that my mother would be home soon, so I hurriedly undressed but I accidentally spilt (洒) a bottle of ink over the bottom of the dress. I was shocked and scared. Carefully, I put it into the box and replaced the box onto the shelf. I lived with the fear throughout my teenage years that it would eventually be discovered. The years passed and my mother grew old and became ill. I made the decision that she would come to live in a nursing home near me. Before she went there, I decided to arrange an afternoon tea with a group of her closest friends. Mom and her friends talked about their past days. 注意