内容正文:
HISTORY AND TRADITIONS
UNIT 4
读后续写微讲堂
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
英语 必修 第二册
制 作 者:状元桥
适用对象:高中学生
制作软件:Powerpoint2010、
Photoshop cs3
运行环境:WindowsXP以上操作系统
读后续写入门篇之设计有效对话(一)
对话是记叙文中刻画人物性格、推动故事情节发展、增加故事生动性的重要表现手法。恰当、有效的对话描写能为文章增光添彩。但许多学生在续写过程中容易大篇幅地使用无效对话,让文本似流水账,枯燥无味。一般可将学生日常习作中常见的无效对话概括为三类:偏离人设的对话、可有可无的对话和偏离故事发展主线的对话。微讲堂将分两讲通过例子逐一阐述,并展示有效对话的转换和有效对话的赏析。
【典例】 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The winter of 1820 was a cold one for the Lincolns.It snowed nearly every day and the snow was high around their little farm house.
Abe Lincoln was just a boy,but he helped his father Tom around the farm.He looked after the house, milked the cow and prepared the dinner.It was hard work and there wasn't much fun for him and his brothers and sisters.Abe liked reading books, but there was no book there.Abe was not happy.He was sad most of the time and seldom talked or smiled.
Mrs Lincoln, Abe's stepmother, really loved the boy.She noticed the boy's silence and was concerned about him.She tried to think of ways to make Abe happy.
One day Mrs Lincoln got up early in the morning.She took all the pennies from a small box. “I'm going to town tomorrow,” she said.
“You're going to town?” Tom Lincoln asked.He was surprised. “That's a long way.You see, the snow is high.What are you going to do in town?Can't you make it another day when the snow stops?”
“It's a surprise.And I must go there tomorrow!” she said with a determined voice.
“Do you want Abe or me to go with you?” Tom asked his wife the next day.
“No, don't worry! I'll be all right,” she said and went out of the house.
Walking in high snow was very difficult.It took Mrs Lincoln a long time to get to the town.She bought something in town and wrapped it carefully.Then she started back.
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It was late in the evening when she got