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写作课一
课余活动
山东鑫聚仁数字制作中心
素材积累
★课内素材
1.Jane has a lot of
good
habits.简有许多好习惯。
2.It is good
for
the
mind
and the
body.它对身心健康有益。
3.She usually
watches
TV
for
more
than_two hours a day.她通常一天看
两个多小时的电视。
4.She hardly_ever_stays up late.她几乎从不熬夜。
5.It’sg0od
to
relax by watching
game shows:通过观看游戏类节日放松
是好的。
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★课外素材
l.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果,医生远离我。
2.A good healthy body is worth more a crown in gold.体魄健全胜金冠。
3.0 ld habits die hard..旧习难改。
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写作训练
随着生活水平的提高,人们的健康意识也有很大的改变。人们更加注重健康问题。请
以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇短文,从良好的生活习惯、适当的体育锻
炼及健康的饮食习惯等方面,为那些生活习惯欠佳、缺乏锻炼的朋友们提出良好的
建议。(要求意思连贯、表达准确,词数80左右)
参考词汇:挑剔(be particular about).;饮食规律(have meals regularly))
第一步。审清题意
1.文体:议论文
With the improvement of the living
开篇
standard,people are paying much
2.人称:第一人称
点题
more attention to their health.
Firstly,we should...We'd better...
3.时态:一般现在时
How to Keep
Secondly,we should...
Healthy
具体
建议
Lastly,we should...
第二步思路点拨
巧妙
In general,if we do like these,
结尾
we will...
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连词成句
l.保持健康很重要。(it,keep healthy)
It is important to keep healthy.
2.那么我们能做些什么来保持健康呢?(what,to keep)
So what can we do to keep healthy?
3.我们最好远离垃圾食品。(stay away from,junk food)
We'd better stay away from junk food.
4.我们应该尽可能经常锻炼,比如跑步、打乒乓球或篮球。(as often as
possible,such as)
We should exercise as often as possible,such as running,playing ping-pong
-or basketball
5.最后,我们应该有一个好习惯。(lastly,good habit)
Lastly,we should have a good habit.
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第四步
组句成篇
第五步
修饰美化(范文见参考答案)
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How to Keep Healthy
With the improvement of the living standard,people are paying much
more attention to their health.It is important to keep healthy.So
what can we do to keep healthy?Here are some suggestions.
Firstly,we should eat healthy food.We'd better stay away
from junk food.We mustn't be particular about food and should have
meals regularly.Secondly,we should exercise as often as possible,such
as i
running,playing ping-pong or basketball.Riding a bike or walking
to
work is also exercise.Lastly,we should have a good habi