内容正文:
写作课一
食物制作
山东鑫聚仁数字制作中心
素材积累
★课内素材
1.First,
peel
the bananas.首先,剥掉香蕉皮。
2.Then,pour
the milk
into
the blender.然后,把牛奶倒入食物搅拌器里。
3.
Turn
on
the blender..打开食物搅拌器。
4.Thanksgiving is a time to give thanks for food in the autumn and other
good things people enjoy in life.感恩节是一个感谢秋季收获食物的时刻,
也是对人们生活中所享受的其他美好事物的感激之时。
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★课外素材
l.A bad beginning makes a bad ending.不善始者不善终。
2.A fall into a pit,a gain in your wit.吃一堑,长一智。
3.A miss is as good as a mile.失之毫厘,差之千里。
4.All things in their being are good for something.天生我材必有用。
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写作训练
你知道怎样制作苹果奶昔吗?根据下面的图画提示,以“How to Make an Apple
Milk Shake”为题写一篇80词左右的短文,简单介绍一下苹果奶昔的做法。短文的
开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Aice-cream
2
3
ni灰
5
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How to Make an Apple Milk Shake
The apple milk shake is healthy and delicious.
第一步
审清题意
The apple milk shake is
开篇点题
healthy and delicious.
1.文体:说明文
You need...
First,peel the apples and...
2.句式:以祈使句为主
Next,put...into...
How to Make
Then,pour...into...
an Apple Milk
Turn on...
3.时态:一般现在时
Shake
Finally,pour the milk shake
具体介绍into a glass.
第工步思路点拨
制作过程
巧妙结尾
Now it's time to enjoy it!
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第三步
连词成句
l.现在让我教你怎么做。(let me teach,.how to)
Now let me teach you how to make it.
2.首先,削苹果皮并把它们切碎。(first,peel,cut up)
First,peel the apples and cut them up.
3.然后,将牛奶倒入食物搅拌器。(then,pour into)
Then,pour the milk into the blender.
4.打开食物搅拌器,让它工作大约一分钟。(turn on,keep it working)
I think people will live to be 200 years old.
5.最后,将奶昔倒入玻璃杯中。(finally,pour into)
Finally,pour the milk shake into a glass.
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第四步
组句成篇
第五步
修饰美化(范文见参考答案)
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How to Make an Apple Milk Shake
The apple milk shake is healthy and delicious.Do you like it?Now
let me teach you how to make it.
You need three apples,some ice-cream and a bottle of milk.First,
peel the apples and cut them up.Next,put the apple pieces and
ice-cream into the blender.Then,pour the milk into the blender.Turn
on the blender and keep it working for about one minute.Finally,pour
the milk shake into a glass.
Now it's time to enjoy it!
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