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写作课—一
生活目标
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素材积累
★课内素材
1.Just make sure you
try
your
best
只要保证尽最大努力就行。
2.What do you want
to
be
when you
grow
up
?你长大后想成为什
么?
3.I'm going
to
keep
on
writing stories..我会继续写故事。
4.I'm going
to
study
hard
and
get
good
grades我打算努力学习并取得好
成绩。
5.Many resolutions
have
to
do
with self-improvement.许多决定与自我提
升有关。
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★课外素材
l.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。
2.Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.生活没有目标就像
航海没有指南针。
3.A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
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写作训练
在新年来临之际,制订新年计划对于提高和完善自我有着重要的意义。2024年马上就
要到了,在新的一年里,你有什么新的计划?请以“My New Year’s Resolutions”
为题,写一篇短文,表达你的三个新年决心。词数不少于80。
第一步
审清题意
Resolutions may help make us a better
person and make our lives easier.I'm
1.文体:记叙文
开篇
going to make three resolutions for the
2.人称:以第一人称为主
点题
new year.
The first resolution is about...
3时态:以一般将来时为主
My New
Year's
具体
The second resolution has to do with...
叙述
The last one is about...
第二步
思路点拨
Resolutions
巧妙
Will you make any resolutions this
结尾
year?What about your resolutions?
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第三步
连词成句
L.我打算为新的一年做三个决定。(I'm going to,the new year)
I'm going to make three resolutions for the new year.
2.也许我会尝试一项新的运动,比如踢足球。(a new sport,playing soccer)
Maybe I'm going to try a new sport like playing
soccer.
3.第二个决定与改善我与家人和朋友的关系有关。(has to do with,improving my
relationships with)
The second resolution has to do with improving my relationships with
my
family and friends.
4.这对我们的友谊很重要。(important,.friendship)
s important for our
friendship.
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5.我认为所有这些都将帮助我取得更好的成绩,获得更多的知识。(get better
grades,more knowledge)
I think all these will help me to get better grades and more knowledge.
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第四步
组句成篇
第五步
修饰美化(范文见参考答案)
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Resolutions may help make us a better person and make our lives
easier.I'm going to make three resolutions for the new year.
The first resolution is about improving my physical health.I am going
to get more exercise.Maybe I'm going to try a new sport like playing
soccer.And I'm going to eat healthier food.I think more exercise