内容正文:
English s
书面表达
话题:自我介绍
话题分析
人物介绍
以“结交朋友”为话题,围绕这一话题学习自我介绍、问候他人、询问和告知电话号码,而最能体现这些话题的写作就
是人物介绍,包括自己或他人。
从以下几个方面入手
(1)What is the first name?
(2)What is the last name?(3)What is the telephone number?
(4)Who is his or her friend?
(5)Where is he or she now?(6)Which school is he or she in?
二、写作模板
1.
段首句I have many good/excellent friends.One of them is...Her name is...
2.She is...years old She is...with...hair.In her free time,she likes.....She enjoys....She is very....She is
always...to help us
3.结尾句She is a,She is like not only.,but also.
二、优秀习作
1.优秀习作I-介绍家人
My Grandma
My grandma is special to me(对我很特别)because we are like(像)friends..She always helps me..There are no
secrets(移密)between us.
When I am with my grandma,we have a lot of happy time together.I know my grandma is very smart because she
seems()to know everything.My grandma is good at many things.She likes cooking.She often cooks delicious food
for me.I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well().
2.优秀习作Ⅱ-介绍自己
Hello,everyone!My name is Linda,a 13-year-old girl.I was born on ()October 16th.I am a middle school
student now.There are four people in my family.my parents,my brother and me.I like playing tennis and soccer because I
think they are very interesting.I also like music.It's relaxing.My favorite subject is English.It's easy for me.
I enjoy making friends,and I want to be friends with you.Write to me.
3.写作实例
Hello,everyone,
I'm glad to have a report about my partner John.He likes tomatoes and bananas.but he doesn't like pears.He also
likes green.He thinks it's good for his eyes.And his favorite subject is science because it's interesting.His science teacher,
Mrs.Chen is great fun.He likes her very much.As for sports.he likes basketball.It's relaxing.And he always plays
basketball with his friends after school.Thanks for listening.
写作指导
思路点拨
体裁:记叙文人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
框架结构
第1步
开篇点题Helo,Iam.,aXx-year-old boy/girl.
第2步
分层介绍
I am a student of xxx school,and I am xx years old.I live in..There are xxxx people in my