内容正文:
高分写作冲关练了
高分写作冲关练
关于饮食与健康的说明文
self today.
【写作任务】
2.He began to feel unusually tired.
快餐食品在时下很流行,尤其受到青少年学生
3.He suffers from a headache.
的欢迎,请以“Fast Food'”为题,根据提示用英
4.What's the matter/trouble problem/wrong
语写一篇短文。
with you?
1.有利方面:快捷、方便,就餐环境舒适、卫生、
5.Take more exercise and you will keep fit.
整洁;
6.It's necessary/important/essential for sb.
2.不利方面:营养欠佳,不利健康:
to do...
3.建议:根据情况,不宜多吃。
7.There are some reasons for...
注意:1.词数80左右:
8.First(ly)....Second(ly),...What's more/
2.可适当增加细节,以使内容充实、行文
Besides...
连贯。
【完成句子】
1.快餐食品在时下很流行,尤其受青少年学生
的欢迎
(一般表达)Nowadays fast food is very popular,
especially among children and teenagers.
(句式升级)Fast food
especially among children and
【审题立意】
teenagers.(more and more)
第一步明确要求
2.当你去一家快餐店点餐,真的是马上就好。
本文属于议论文,要点包括快餐流行、有利方
(一般表达)When you order your food in a
面、不利方面和建议这四个方面。时态以
fast food restaurant,it really takes you little
为主,人称用
较合适。
time.
第二步
确定段落
(句式升级)
it is
Part 1
ready in no time.(whenever引导状语从句)
Part 2
3.那儿的环境舒适愉悦,而且干净,还有出色
Part 3
的服务和优质的食物。
Part 4
(一般表达)The atmosphere there is very
【必备词汇】
pleasant and comfortable.It's very clean
1.在…中受欢迎
and it has excellent service and good quality
2.点餐
food.
3.而且
(句式升级1)
pleasant
4.出色的服务和优质的食物
and comfortable atmosphere
5.均衡的饮食
excellent service and good quality
6.新鲜的蔬菜
food.(as well as)
【素材积累】
(句式升级2)It is very pleasant and comfortable
1.He doesn't feel well./He is not quite him-
it's very clean
·英语
UNIT 1 Food for thought
and you can enjoy excellent service and good
However,fast food is not good for people's
quality food..(不定式:What's more)
health,especially for children.As we all
4.我们都知道,快餐食物中含有大量脂肪,不是均
know,it's usually not a balanced diet.And
衡的饮食。
there is too much fat in the food.So you can't
(一般表达)We all know that fast food is
get enough fresh vegetables.The price of the
usually not a balanced diet.And there is too
food there is very high.
much fat in the food.
So in order to keep fit,eat fast food as lit-
(句式升级)
fast food
tle as possible.It's only a choice when you are
with too much fat in it is