读后续写写作策略探讨课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习

读 后 续 写 Continuation Writing Teaching objectives 01. read for the main plot and writing skills; 02.write a passage on continuation writing by discussion and group work. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village. On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him. The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours?”“Yes, sir,” the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地). “Have you killed the man?” “No, no, sir,” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man?” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man?” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet?” “No, sir.”The officer became angry and told the policeman to beat him up and send him into prison. The officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer. Paragraph 1：The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. Paragraph 2：The farmer was lucky. A few days later,… Here is a sample test. 读文章：梳理故事的时间、地点、人物、事件等要素，了解文章梗概。 回扣原文：根据文章给出的线索，进一步分析主要人物情感发展线和情节发展脉络。 谋段： 1.在读懂文章的基础上，仔细阅读续写所提供的开头句，找出两者的联系，做好两段衔接。特别注意第二段开头句，往往隐含第一段结尾要写的内容。 2.按照每一段的首句提示，提出合乎逻辑的问题，列出写作提纲，筛选情节，做到环环相扣。 3.最后一段结尾部分一定要紧扣文章主题，使文章主题前后一致，高度融合。 拟写草稿：在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中划线的关键词语拟写草稿。 修改润色全文：注意句子结构的多样性、语言的丰富性和语言的准确性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯、有过渡。 写作步骤 Lead in