Unit 4 单元写作导学案- 2023-2024学年高中英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

必修一Unit4 如何用英语写新闻摘要 新闻摘要写作是对一则新闻主要内容的提炼和浓缩，要求学生通过阅读，能理解新闻的 主要内容、提炼其关键信息并能概括归纳其要点。这种写作方式既要求学生有准确的理解能 力，又要求学生具有高度的概括能力。 新闻摘要写作一般分为以下四个步骤： 第一步：阅读新闻，摘选关键信息。通过对新闻内容的仔细阅读，掌握新闻的主要内容 和篇章结构，摘出新闻中事件发生的时间、地点、起因、结果以及可能的后续活动等。 第二步：总结新闻各段主旨大意。概括总结新闻每段的中心意思，按照顺序列出要点， 只保留新闻中的主要事实，省略不必要的事实细节和事例。 第三步：组织语言。列出详细的写作提纲，拟出初稿。尽可能用自己的语言进行表达， 也可以适当借鉴使用原文的某些词语和句子。摘要的长度往往是原文本的三分之一，内容只 包括文本中重要的信息或事例，不需要加入自己的感情色彩和评论。 第四步：修改内容，定稿作品。对初稿的修改包括： 1.看要点是否齐全，观点是否一致： 2,精简摘要中出现的不必要的词汇、短语或长句子： 3.确认拼写、语法和标点符号无误。 写作任务 阅读下面的新闻，然后写一篇摘要。 Record-Breaking Flooding in Zhengzhou,Henan Extremely heavy rainfall hit Zhengzhou,a city of 12.6 million on the banks of the Yellow River,on July 20,2021. More than 100.000 people were relocated to safe places.with thousands of rescue workers sent to assist in the effort.Due to the deadly rainfall,people on the street,with water up to their hips,worked desperately to pull out people trapped in an underground mall using ropes.People also made a human chain to avoid being swept away by the flood as they struggled through rushing water.The citys subway system,whose carriages of Subway line 5 were washed away by the heavy rain,suspended (all operations after the incident,said provincial authorities After July 20,the rainfall started to weaken.It caused heavy damage in Henan,with 292 people confirmed dead and 47 missing in Zhengzhou alone.Of the victims,189 were killed directly by floods and debris flow(泥石流)，54 were killed by house collapses,39 drowned in underground spaces such as the subway,the tunnel and garages,and 10 people died from other causes. "Though flooding during the summer months is usual in parts of China,recent record- breaking rains raised questions as to whether the country is prepared to deal with more extreme and unpredictable weather caused by climate change,"a scientist said 写作指导 该新闻报道了河南省郑州市受特大暴雨袭击导致受灾严重的事件。通过分析，我们可以 发现第一段清晰地列出了暴雨发生的时间(2021年7月20日)和地点（河南省郑州市）。 第二段介绍了特大暴雨发生时灾区的具体情况：十万多人被转移到安全地带，数以千计的救 援人员前往灾区，被困的人们利用各种方法自救，交通系统也随之崩渍。第三段阐述了此次 特大暴雨造成的严重损失。第四段阐述了