内容正文:
必修一Unit2
如何用英语写旅行计划
写作任务
假定你是李华,以下是近期你在网上看到的一个关于厦门的旅游宣传册。请你根据宣传
册内容,制定旅行计划,并给你的英国笔友B写一封电子邮件,邀请他和你一起前往厦门
旅行。
Xiamen-the must-go city in life
As one of the cleanest and most beautiful seaport cities,Xiamen is a deservedly famous
tourist destination in China.Here,the scenic spot you must not miss is Gulangyu,also called
the"Garden on the Sea".There are many buildings of Chinese and foreign styles.In addition.
Xiamen University and South Putuo Temple are also worth a visit.The city's charm comes
from not only the beautiful sights but also the local food,such as Sate Noodles (and
Peanut Soup(花生汤),By the way,going to Zhongshan Road is a good choice to taste these
delicacies.
Welcome to Xiamen!
注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾己给出,但不计入总词数);2.可适当增加细节,以使
行文连贯。
Dear Bill.
How is everything going these days?Recently I read a travel brochure for Xiamen
Yours.
Li Hua
【写作指导】
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求给英国笔友B写一封电子邮件介绍旅行计划。旅行计划通常包括旅行
的重要景点以及旅行安排等。介绍旅行计划多用一般现在时和一般将来时,人称以第一人称
为主。
二、谋篇布局
本写作的开头和结尾已给出,所以我们只需写出正文部分即可。正文可分为三部分:
第一部分:表明写信目的:
第二部分:具体介绍旅行计划:
第三部分:表达期待。
三、组织语言
第一部分:表明写信目的。
普通表达
I am writing to invite you to go with me and introduce...to you.
I'm happy /eager to travel with you.
高级表达
I'd like to invite you to join me for a visit and share...with
you
I can't wait to take on the exciting trip with you.
第二部分:具体介绍旅行计划。
●We will arrive in…by plane
I prefer to go there by...because...
普通表达
On the first day,we can visit...,a small island full of fresh air and
sweet
music.
On the second day,we will go to...It is located...
On the last day,we can take a bus to go to...to...
O We will fly to our destination.
Compared with....travelling by...can be more...
高级表达
On arrival,we can spend one day visiting...Breathing the fresh air
and
enjoying the beautiful music,anyone visiting here will be satisfied.
On the following day,we will head for....which is...
On the last day.we will go on a tour around..by bus,where we can...
第三部分:表达期待。
I would love to hear your thoughts,so please let me know your ideas./If you
普通表达
have