内容正文:
Period Six Writing—An opinion essay
Learning Aims(学习目标)
1.Learn how to write an opinion essay
2.Practice writing one(重点难点)
本单元的写作任务是写评论性文章。评论性文章分为三个部分:
第一部分:引入话题;
第二部分:陈述正方和反方观点及理由;
第三部分:发表自己的观点。
常用表达
介绍讨论的主题(开头句):
1.Recently we have had a heated discussion/debate about whether...
2.We’ve had a research/survey on...
3.I’m writing to tell you about a discussion/debate we have had about...
过渡句:
1.The answers to these questions vary from person to person.
2.Opinions of the issue/Attitudes towards the problem often differ sharply/widely.
3.Different people,however,have different opinions on this matter/issue.
介绍正方观点:
1.Some people hold the view that/argue/maintain that...
2.It clearly enables people to solve/enjoy...
介绍反方观点:
1.Despite all the advantages, it also brings its own problems...
2.However/Nevertheless, others are opposed to...
3.The chief problem is that...
表明自己的观点:
1.Personally, I disagree with/advocate...
2.Whether it is good or harmful,one thing is clear...
假设你是李华,最近你班就“使用手机的利与弊”进行了讨论,请根据讨论结果,写一封信向校报编辑反映此事。
赞成的理由
反对的理由
你的看法
联系他人便利;
获得更多的学习资源。
沉溺手机;
浏览不健康网站。
……
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第一步 审题谋篇
[审题]
写作要求是阐述“使用手机的利与弊”的讨论结果,写作时应注意下面三点:
1.确定文体:这是一篇议论文。写作时要注意议论文的写作特点。
2.主体时态:文章应以一般现在时为主。
3.主体人称:由于是关于“使用手机的利与弊”的话题,所以人称应该以第三人称为主。
[谋篇]
本文可以分为三个部分:
第一部分:引入话题——使用手机的利与弊。
第二部分:说明正方和反方的观点及理由。
第三部分:表明自己的观点。
第二步 遣词造句
[核心词汇]
1.偏爱 have a preference for
2.一……就…… the instant/instantly
3.打开 switch on
4.相关的relevant
5.提倡advocate
6.尽管如此;不过;然而 nevertheless
7.反对做某事 be opposed to/oppose doing sth.
8.与……保持联系 keep in touch with
9.对某人冷淡 keep sb.at a distance
[连词成句]
1.一些学生偏爱手机。
Some students have a preference for cellphones.
2.手机使得与亲戚和朋友联系更方便。
Cellphones make it more convenient to keep in touch with friends and relatives.
3.他们一打开手机,就能够获得相关的学习资源。
The instant/Instantly they switch on cellphones, they can obtain relevant learning resources.
4.然而,有一些学生反对过多地使用手机。
Nevertheless, there are some students who are opposed to/oppose using cellphones too much.
5.