Module 3 Unit 10 Healthy eating 写作（素材）牛津上海版（试用本）英语六年级上册

市北初级中学6A Unit 10写作辅导1 Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “How to keep healthy”. (以“如何保持健康”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文。) Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考) ● Do you think health is important? ● What do you do to keep healthy? ● How to keep healthy? 怎样写好“how to keep healthy”类的英语作文 要想写好“how to keep healthy”类的英语作文，我们首先应该在头脑中或草纸上拟好一个大致的提纲，即从几个方面来介绍如何保持健康；接着，在开头点题后，根据拟好的几个方面来逐一补充内容，即细致地介绍从某一方面如何具体去做；最后，应表达出健康对工作、学习和生活的巨大作用。 写作步骤 Step 1 开头点题：It’s important for us to keep healthy. If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. Step 2根据拟好的几个方面来逐一补充内容：We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. We should exercise every day. We should also eat healthy food every day. Step 3表达出健康对工作、学习和生活的巨大作用: In a word, it’s necessary for us to keep healthy. It can help us study better at school. 写作分析: 要想写好此类作文我们需要积累的词汇和句型有：health, healthy, keep, stay, habit, diet, early, exercise, enough, get up, go to bed, It’s important for us to ..., It’s necessary to ... Samples(范文) Sample 1. Do you know how to be a healthy kid? If you don’t know, here are some suggestions for you. Firstly, eat different foods, especially fruit and vegetables. You may have your favourite food, but you should eat something different. If you eat different foods, you will probably get more nutrients (n.营养物) your body needs. Secondly, when you are eating, try to feel how your body feels. When your stomach (n. 胃) feels full (adj. 饱的), eating more will not make you feel comfortable (adj. 舒适的) and it will surely (adv.无疑；一定) make you fat. At last, watch less TV and play fewer computer games. It is good for you to take more exercise such as playing basketball, swimming and so on. You shouldn’t watch TV for more than two hours a day. If you follow these suggestions, you will be a healthy kid. Trust (v. 信任) me! 教师点评：本文结构清晰，语句通顺，清楚表达了小作者自己的想法，尤其是连接副词和从句的运用，更是为文章添彩不少，是一篇不错的习作。 Sample 2. Do you know how to be a healthy kid? If you want to be a healthy ki