Module 1 写作指导 2023-2024学年外研版九年级英语上册

Module1写作指导 话题分析 本模块的话题是“世界奇观”，与此相关的写作任务是介绍自然或人造景观。写此类文章 时，一般先点明该景观的位置和主要特点，然后介绍交通方式、游览时间及其主要景色， 最后作总结式评价。介绍景观时多用一般现在时态，使用频率较高的单词和短语有vst, enjoy oneself,wonder,beautiful等。 常用句型 1.The Niagara Falls is one of the greatest natural wonders of the world. 2.The Great Wall is a manmade wonder. 3.It's more than 2,000 years old. 4.In my opinion/For me,manmade wonders are more exciting than natural ones. 5.I look down to the Colorado River,a silver stream nearly one mile below me. 6.Thousands of people walk along the Great Wall every year. 7.I'd like to visit the Giant's Causeway because I love wild places by the sea. 写作储备 1.Go there by bike/bus/train/plane... 2.There be (is/are/was/were)... 3.be known to.../be famous for... 4.One of the greatest wonders... 5.One of the most popular places of interest... 6.Every year thousands of people from home and abroad come to visit it. 典型示例一 黄山Mount Huangshan)是中国最著名的自然奇观之一，位于安徽省南部。假如上周日你 和朋友们游览了黄山，请用英语写一篇短文，记录你们的游览经历。 写作要求：1语句通顺，语意连贯，可适当发挥： 2.词数：90左右。 写作思路 开篇点题 I visited Mount Huangshan... 具体介绍 It's one of...It's about...high.When we started,it...We looked at the sights... We were proud of... 表达感受 How beautiful...We were proud... 范文佳作 I visited Mount Huangshan with my friends last Sunday. It is one of the most famous natural wonders in China.It is in the south of Anhui Province.Its tallest place is called Lianhua Peak and it is about 1,864 metres high.When we started,it was raining.Ten minutes later,the rain stopped and the clouds cleared.We began to climb.But after half an hour,one of my friends felt very tired and he wanted to stop.Then we had a short rest.At last,we got to the top of Mount Huangshan. How beautiful it was when we looked at the sights from the top We were proud of Mount Huangshan. 点评 ①开篇点题，固定结构“It is one of-+he十最高级+可数名词复数”的运用。 ②按时间顺序写出游览过程，如“..started..Ten minutes later..after half an hour..At last.”。 ③用感叹句对黄山进行了评价，短语“be proud of'”说明了自己的感受。 写作练习一 假如某中学生英语杂志正在征文，主题为“人造奇观”。请你根据下面的提示信息，写一 篇90词左右的短文介绍埃菲尔铁塔(the Eiffel Tower