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Module 4 Home alone
模块话题满分范文必背
一、话题作文
1.(2023辽宁丹东统考一模)孩子是家庭中重要的组成部分,父母在每个孩子的成长过程中都付出了许
多辛苦。作为子女,我们应该做些事情来回报父母。请根据个人情况从下面两个情境中任选其一完成作文:
情境一:如果你曾经为父母做过令他们感动的事情,请写一篇短文描述一下当时的情景及你和父母的感受。
情境二:如果你还没来得及为父母做什么,请写一篇短文谈谈你计划为他们做的事情及其原因。
写作要求:
(1)语言表达准确,语意通顺连贯:
(2)书写工整规范:
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名:
(4)词数:70词左右。
【答案】例文:
Our parents have done a lot of hard work for us.As children,we should do something to repay them.Now let
me share what I did for my parents
On day last year,our teacher asked us to do something for our parents to thank them.Many students prepared
different kinds of gifts for their parents,such as flowers,clothes and so on.However,I wanted to make a meal for
my parents because they were too hard.I hoped they could feel my love for them.They were moved to hug me.
When I saw my parents enjoying the meal I cooked for them.I felt so happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文:
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”:
③提示:写作要点已给出,可结合实际情况在两种情境中任选其一,适当添加细节使内容更加丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作主题,用“父母为我们付出的”引出主题“我们为父母做过的事”:
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第二步,具体阐述写作内容,讲述整个事情的起因与经过:
第三步,书写结尾,通过“父母的反应”来表达“自己的感受”。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb.todo让某人做某事
②different kinds of不同种类的
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①However,.I wanted to make a meal for my parents because they were too hard.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②Now let me share what I did for my parents.(What引导的宾语从句)
2.(2022辽宁抚顺统考二模)根据要求完成大作文,词数:80~100词。
假如你是初三学生李华,在初三紧张的学习生活中,你感受到了父母对你浓浓的爱。请以“My parents'”
为题,跟大家分享一下你是如何感受来自你父母对你的爱的。
My parents
【答案】例文:
My parents
This time I'd like to talk about my parents.I don't realize how much they love me until I am under pressure.
I am not good at study,but my parents always encourage me to be confident.Every day they go out of their
way to make delicious food for me.Also,they pay much attention to my feelings.Whenever they find me upset,
they will communicate with me patiently
Now I decided to study harder.Only in this way can I show my thanks to my parent.
【详解】[总体分析]
①趣材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”:
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意围绕“信息提示“讲述自己