2024届高三英语一轮复习读后续写（家庭亲情篇）课件

读后续写训练 （家庭亲情篇） Story Mountain Build-up Opening _________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Climax ___________________________________ ___________________________________ Resolution Today she showed up in a raincoat. Mom tried to cover me with the back of the raincoat again as a storm set in. Ending Read for the plot（What） Story Mountain Build-up Opening 放学的时候，天色渐暗，天空飘起了毛毛细雨。在等妈妈来 接“我”的过程中，“我”看到朋友们都坐在舒适的汽车里。想到“我”只能坐在妈妈破旧的自行车上时，“我”感 到尴尬，甚至沮丧。 还有一件事让“我”：妈妈常给“我”织毛衣，毛衣的样式比较老土，这也让“我”觉得没面子。 Climax “我”也会回想起和妈妈在一起的快乐时光，但不知从什么时候起，“我”和妈妈之间有了隔阂。 Resolution 今天，她穿着雨衣出现了······ 暴风雨来袭时，妈妈又一次试图用雨衣的后背遮盖住“我”······ Ending Read for the plot（What） Read for the theme: 母爱是最无私的爱。 Read for the language: 1. I knew all I could expect was an old bike Mom would ride along on, with the badly-oiled chain creaking against the wheel to announce her arrival. (para.1) creak是拟声词，意为“嘎吱作响”。with the badly-oiled chain creaking against the wheel to announce her arrival, 让人产生“未见其人，先闻其声”之感。该词不仅生动地反映出妈妈自行车破旧的状态，也表达了作者对妈妈自行车的厌恶和对妈妈关爱的抗拒。 2. It was like stepping into a ballroom with beautifully dressed ladies and finding yourself in a smelly T-shirt. (para.2) 该句运用了比喻的修辞手法，通过对比，生动地描写出了“作者坐在妈妈的自行车上穿行于舒适的小汽车之间的尴尬”。续写部分也可以通过对比反映人物情感，实现前后照应以及材料和续写内容的协同。 【参考范文】 Today she showed up in a raincoat. Once shesaw me, Mom called my name excitedly. Almost everybody present looked in her direction. I swallowed hard, ducked my head and inched towards her, sweat forming in tiny droplets on my forehead. When she tried to cover me with the back of her raincoat. I simply threw it aside.I hated riding with her. Without a single word. I jumped onto the backseat. Minutes later, the rain got heavier and the wind picked up. I felt a wave of panic. Mom tried to cover me with the back of the raincoat again as a storm set in. This time, I accepted silently. With the wind roaring angrily and the raincoat dancing, I felt warm and secure insi