Unit 1 写作指导 学案 2023-2024学年人教新目标八年级英语上册

Unit 1　写作指导 话题概述 本单元以“假期活动”为话题，围绕这一话题谈论自己过去的经历。在写相关的作文时，首先要学会运用一般过去时来描述过去发生的事情。这类文章的主要内容为记录及描述参观访问、旅游出行、走亲访友的过程或心得，体裁以记叙文为主。 典型例题1 请以“My Trip to ________”为题，根据以下要点提示与要求写一篇短文，记叙你的一次旅行。 要点提示：1.Where did you go? 2．What did you do there? 3．How did you feel about the trip? 要求：1.请在题目空白处填入你的旅行地点，如：Beijing，Ji'nan，Qingdao等； 2．80词左右。 My Trip to ________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 写作指导 经典范文 My Trip to Beijing I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents this summer. On the first day，we went to Tian'anmen Square and I watched the flag-raising ceremony. How wonderful it was！Then，we visited the Great Wall. Like its name，it is great. The next day we visited the Palace Museum，the Summer Palace and Tiantan Park. We took lots of photos. We ate Beijing duck. It was delicious. I also bought some gifts for my friends. Although I felt very tired，I was happy. I hope to visit Beijing again. 典型例题2 假如你是某国际学校八年级的学生李萍，平时有用英语写日记的习惯。本周六你和父母进行了一次短途旅行，请你用英语写一篇日记，把你的经历记录下来。 要求：1.语句通顺、连贯，可适当发挥； 2．80词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 写作指导 内容：记录当天去某地的旅游经历，着重记录你所看到的、听到的和你的感受。 文体：应用文(日记)；日记的主体部分为记叙文。 时态：描写过去发生的事情，用一般过去时。 人称：第一人称I或we。 写作提纲 开篇点题: 天气、人物及旅 游目的地 The weather was fine. I went to Beijing on vacation with my family． 旅游经历 (早上、 中 午、下午) In the morning we visited… After that we… At noon we ate … In the afternoon we went to… 表达感受 All in all, we had a fun time today． 经典范文 Saturday, April 4th Spring is coming. The weather was fine today. I went to Beijing on vacation with my family. In the morning we visited the Summer Palace. We climbed the Wanshou Hill and enjoyed the beautiful buildings and trees at the top of the hill. After that we went boating on Kunming Lake. At noon we ate something special like Beijing roast duck. It was delicious. In the aft