读后续写拓展句子技巧 课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习

Continuation Writing -How to expand sentences? by Lifenglian 开始续写的你 读不懂 不清楚 好难 没头绪 无从下手 提高一分 干掉千人 Which one looks like your cuisine? 1 2 3 Let’s discuss Some requirements of an excellent continuation writing: 语法高级 画面感 细节丰富生动 前后呼应 紧扣主题 抒发情感 How? ※ 句子结构多变。(强调句,倒装句,感叹句,定语从句,状语从句,what和it句型,无灵主语,独立主格,分词作状语,形容词短语作状语) ※ 拓展句子,注意句子开头。 We got off the track. Farther and farther, we got off the track. ※“两读一写” 一读前文理情节,二读段首续发展,三写后文重表达。 1. v-ing e.g. Running towards the rabbit, I forgot what Uncle Paul told us. Smiling sweetly, Lily gave me a letter and walked away. Thinking, laughing, soaring,enjoying…… Lying awake in the dark, I felt the world had closed all the doors to me. Seeing Squint jumping up to a tree, we returned happily. Seeing Squint returned to the forest, we went back in relief. 2. simile The smile on her face shone like a diamond. Like a pale ghost, Jim went out of the cave. as proud as a peacock, as drunk as a mouse, like a nightmare, like a sharp knife…… The wind was like a sharp knife. The icy wind cut my face like a sharp knife. It was no exaggeration to utter that the unforgettable experience was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my memories. 毫不夸张的说,这段难忘的经历就像一朵永恒的花,绽放在我的记忆长河里。 3. Preposition e.g. On the top of Titanic stood Jack and Rose. From the bottom of his heart, Mac was full of gratitude to his friends for what they did. With the company of Deedo, I didn’t feel lonely any more. 4. Adverb My sister threw her bag on the floor and stormed upstairs to her room. Angrily, my sister threw her bag on the floor and stormed upstairs to her room. I stood up and took out my wallet. Unwillingly, I stood up and took out my wallet. Immediately, the news spread that he was admitted into Peking University. 5. v-ed form Exhausted and tired, Petrified, I was speechless and rooted on the ground. Bitten by the snake, I was scared and desperate. we got to the farm house at last. 6. drop in(clause) My father , who was a famous doctor, was helpful and kind t