内容正文:
Can you help Li Hua
make it better?
Hello,everyone. I’m Li Hua. My topic today is Music and Me.
Going from junior high school to senior high school was a really big challenge . I found it so difficult to make new friends that I felt extremely lonely and discouraged. From then on, I buried myself in music which is like an old friend, keeping me company. Music brought me a sense of safety. Besides, music brought me happiness. More importantly, music brought me hope.
So I hope all of you will turn to music while facing difficulities.
That is all. Thank you!
B2U5 Music Reading for Writing
景宁中学 毛丽琴 雷卫娟
Write a Speech
Beginning
Body
Ending
clear structure
greeting
introduction
stating topic
the story of how music has had an impact on Sarah’s life
hopes and thanks
topic-focused
Use a rhetorical question as
a transitional sentence to lead
to one’s own experience.
The story of how music has had an impact on Sarah’s life
rhetorical question
3 “gave”s
emphasize
repetition
attractive language
The story of how music has had an impact on Sarah’s life
general
specific/vivid
simile 明喻
metaphor 暗喻
personification 拟人
attractive language
The story of how music has had an impact on Sarah’s life
“Music is the medicine of mind”
Summarize
Beginning
Body
Ending
structure content language
greeting,self-introduction and topic
experience with music
feelings about music
hopes and thanks to the audience
rhetorical devices:
repetition,simile,
metaphor,personification
rhetorical question, quote
clear
topic-focused
attractive
Assess and Polish
Hello,everyone. I’m Li Hua. My topic today is Music and Me.
Going from junior high school to senior high school was a really big challenge . I found it so difficult to make new friends that I felt extremely alone and discouraged. From then on, I buried myself in music which is like an old friend, keeping me company. Music brought me a sense of safety. Besides,