2024届高考英语复习之读后续写 一家人漂流遇险，最终成功脱险 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 一家人漂流遇险，最终成功脱险 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 On June 4th, my family and I decided to go white-water rafting(激浪漂流) down the Nantahala River in Western North Carolina. It was a perfect day to be out on the water. My father thought that we could all deal with a new situation, so he decided to bring us to go without a guide at this new, hard course. My mom and I were upset by my dad’s decision, but my brother was pleased with it. So, we had to agree with them. We got life jackets, our raft and paddles that were used to row it, and then took a bus to the drop point where we carried the raft to the icy cold water. Having finished the training, we were on our own white-water rafting. 4 4 续写原文 Within the first hour, we got stuck on two rocks. Another raft had to hit ours to get us off the rocks. After about two hours, we saw a huge rock on the right side of the river. It was coming out of the water about ten feet high and about fifteen feet wide. Somehow, we ended up on top of this rock. After about a minute, water started rushing in where my brother was sitting. When he started falling into the water, I tried to pull him back. Unfortunately, we fell off together. My mother jumped in after us, but she could only get to my brother because he was closer than I was. My dad jumped out and ran up the bank of the river to get to the road, so he could see where I was. I was picked up after about two minutes by a stranger in another raft and was heading down the river toward a little resting spot. 5 5 段首句 Para 1： I kept crying because I was so frightened and worried about my family. Para 2：One of the guides for another raft told us that there was an earlier place we could get out. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 8 8 续写思路分析 本文以作者一家人去漂流线索，讲述了作者一家人漂流的经历，因为两兄弟落水而造成了令人害怕的体验，因此作者决定不再漂流。 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： I kept crying because I was so