写作第2讲 作文升格3妙招（word教参）-【正禾一本通】2024高考英语高三一轮总复习高效讲义（人教版，老教材老高考）

第2讲　作文升格3妙招 一、高级词汇，亮眼吸睛 使用高级词汇并不等于使用一些偏难、古怪的词汇，而是使用一些表意准确、形象生动、语法正确且符合以英语为母语的人的习惯表达方式的词汇。在使用词汇时，我们可以尝试三大原则。 1．新颖性原则 写作时恰当使用其他考生可能想象不到的词汇会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。 ①(2022·新高考卷Ⅰ)As our famous foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. →As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can benefit us a lot. ②(2022·全国乙卷)Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, more and more students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in many ways. →Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways. 2．具体化原则 所谓词义具体化原则是指写作中尽量避免使用意义宽泛、模糊的词，而要根据语境使用具体生动的词。 ①(2022·全国乙卷)In conclusion，we should find a way to study English better. →In conclusion，we should find a way to study English more efficiently. ②So good do they look that I think you could be interested in them. →So attractive and alive do they look that I think you could be interested in them. 3．短语优先原则 短语的意思往往比单个单词的意思更为饱满，因此考生宜使用短语巧妙表达文章的意思。 ①(2021·全国乙卷)We should know its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient. →W should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient. ②I would like to congratulate you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition. →I would like to convey my congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition. 二、靓丽句式，表达多样 高分作文的重要特征之一就是句式多变，语法活用。 因此，考生在写作时要善于升级句式，熟练掌握润色句子的技能，交叉使用不同句型，增加句子的层次感和多样化。 1．精彩绝伦的复合句 (1)吸引眼球的状语从句 (2022·新高考卷Ⅰ)As your student as well, I will be very honored if you could accept my invitation to do an interview. 作为你的学生，如果你能接受我的邀请来进行访谈，我将感到非常荣幸。 (2)增加亮点的定语从句 (2021·全国甲卷满分作文)To introduce Chinese traditional culture, our school will hold a theme class meeting, which will be exhibited on the English website. 为了介绍中国传统文化，我校将举办主题班会，在英语网站上展出。 (3)提升档次的名词性从句 (2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文)It's si