内容正文:
Section 9 Writing—Write an Informal Email
题型解读
谋篇思路
有关建议的邮件是写给某人,就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议的应用文,有时是写给某一组织就其服务改进方面提出建议和忠告。建议信应目的明确,合情合理
首段:说明写信缘由
主体段落:陈述具体的建议和理由
尾段:希望建议被考虑和采纳
积满分素材
■ 夺人眼球开头句
1.Since/Now that you are worried about how to choose suitable courses, Im writing to/Id like to offer some suggestions about how to ...
因为你担心如何选择合适的课程,我写信/我想就如何……提些建议。
2.I am sorry to learn/know/hear that you are now having trouble/difficulty communicating with others.
知道/听到你现在在与他人交流方面有些麻烦/困难, 我很难过。
3.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ...
很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。
4.Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.
这里有一些建议可以帮助你。
5.I think you can make it if you follow the following advice/the advice below.
如果你听从以下建议,我认为你会做到的。
■ 亮点出彩篇中句
1.Why not join a volunteer club? If you do this, you can not only help others but also make friends.
为什么不参加一个志愿者俱乐部?如果你这样做的话, 你不仅能帮助他人也会交到朋友。
2.In addition, it would be a good idea/a wise choice if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down.
另外,如果你看书或听音乐,这将会是个不错的主意/明智的选择。通过这样做,你会使自己平静下来。
3.As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/In my view, theres no need for you to be shy and all of us are willing to be friends with you.
依我看/我认为,你没有必要害羞,我们都愿意成为你的朋友。
4.Id like to recommend/suggest/advise that you should sign up for the present subjects.
我建议你报名参加现在的课程。
5.Only in this way will you improve your Chinese and speak it more fluently.
只有用这种方式,你才能提高汉语并更流利地讲汉语。
6.As to how to get along well with your classmates, you should remember that kindness is the most important.
至于如何与同学相处,你应该记住,友善最重要。
■ 韵味无穷结尾句
1.I hope you will find these ideas useful/practical/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些办法有用/实用/有帮助。
2.As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the advice/suggestions above.
如果你遵从以上建议,随着时间的推移,人们会更加了解你,愿意和你交朋友。
3.I am certain that if you follow my advice, youll keep up with your classmates.
我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你会跟上同学们的。
4.I believe, with your effort, you c