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专题09书面表达
(2023.全国乙卷书面表达)
52. 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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【答案】 When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文,请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会:opportunity → chance
使沮丧:demoralize → discourage
满意的:satisfied → content
空闲的:leisure → spare
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.
拓展句:The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.
点睛
【高分句型1】When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语