2023新高考I卷应用文分析意见信+投诉信课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习

意见信 2023年高考英语新高考I卷 应用文写作分析 假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语培训班，让练习口语的所有的学生两人一组练习，随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，说说原因和提建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 思维品质：发现分组中存在的问题，解决这一问题的能力，考查学生分析问题、解决问题以及批判性的思维能力。 文化意识：在人际交往中，恰当的语言和合适的语气会让交流双方都受益，需要考生具有一定的语用能力。 学习能力：如何让分组能在口语学习和提升方面最优化，引导考生们在平时学习中应当充分发挥同伴的作用。 语言能力：熟练掌握提出意见和建议等相关表达。 核心素养能力考查点 语篇类型：邮件（意见反馈+建议信） 语体：正式体，礼貌得体 段落安排： Para 1 自我介绍+邮件目的 Para 2 说明随机分组弊端+提出建议 Para 3 期盼采纳建议 思路点拨 Brainstorm：随机分组弊端+你的建议 常用表达 英语口语培训班 随机配对 没法顺畅交流 降低参与积极性 根据个人喜好 增强动力 提高操练效率 oral English training class be randomly divided in pairs unable to communicate smoothly reduce their enthusiasm in participation based on students’ personal preference boost motivation promote practice efficiency 常用表达 1. 邮件目的 ●Knowing that you intend to..., I'd like to share my personal concerns and advice. ●With regard to ..., I feel it a bit improper and have some suggestions on it. 常用表达 2. 说明分组问题+提出建议 ● I think it would be ... for students to .... For one thing, it may ..., thus .... For another, ...., which may lead to ... Therefore, I believe that ... would be a better choice, which enables every student to ... 常用表达 3. 期盼采纳建议 ●I'd really appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration. ●I genuinely hope my suggestions could be taken into account and the ... will be a great success. A possible version Dear Ryan, I’ m Li Hua, one of your students. With regard to your grouping method for the oral English training, I feel it a bit improper and have some suggestions on it. Students are of different levels and different characters. If randomly chosen, they may face huge gaps, thus bringing about great difficulty in communicating smoothly. Therefore, I believe pairing up students based on their speaking abilities and interests would be a better choice, which can boost their motivation and promote practice efficiency. I'd really appreciate it if you could take my sugge