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高考读后续写几种结尾方法
在读后续写中,结尾发挥着非常重要的作用,精彩的结尾好似画龙点睛,让人回味无穷。常见的结尾方式有景物描写结尾、哲理性语言结尾、自然结尾等。
除基本的揭示故事结尾外,在表现手法上,结尾还应与前文伏笔照应,使人觉得在情理之中;与前文形成对比,点明主旨,深化主题。在塑造人物形象上,结尾应表现人的心理、性格、品质、经历、命运、能力等。在故事情节上,结尾还可以照应标题和开头,使故事结构完整。下面简要的介绍一下常用的几种读后续写的结尾方法。
1. 回环照应式结尾( Circular Ending )
结尾与开头照应,有时可引用作者在开头的观点、甚至以与开头语一模一样的字眼结尾。结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上,深化主题,起到画龙点睛的效果。但是注意一点,不要照搬开头的句子,要变化句式或者用词来表达相同的主题。
【2017年浙江高考题】开头;I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother--loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful.
结尾:Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom.
【2018年浙江高考题】开头:It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
结尾:Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.
2. 道理寓意式结尾(Lesson or Moral Ending)
哲理式结尾,即在结尾用富含哲理的语句,总结全文,升华主旨,并给人以启发。其一般用于引申文意,起到“言已尽而意无穷”的效果,使文章的中心更突出。同学们平常可以积累一些富含哲理的段落或句子,若将之移用到文章的结尾,不仅能深化主题,而且能启人深思,给读者以有益的启迪。
【2020年新高考全国卷I(山东)】It is love that makes the world go round,just as a saying goes,“the fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose.”
【2020年新高考全国卷I(山东)】 It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another,and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
【哲理式结尾佳句积累】
1. Man is not made for defeat. A man can be destroyed but not defeated.
人不是为失败而生的。人可以毁灭,但不能被打败。
2.The pessimist sees difficulty in every opportunity. The optimist sees opportunity in every difficulty.
悲观主义者在每个机会里看到困难,乐观主义者在每个困难那里看到机会。
3. Be thankful for what you have; you’ll end up having more. If you concentrate on what you don't have,you’ll never,ever have enough.
感激你所拥有的,最终你会得到更多。如果你总是对那些没有得到的东西耿耿于怀,那么你永远也不会满足。
4. The best way to defeat your fear is to face your fear head-on.
克服恐惧最好的方法是迎面直击。
5. Never underestimate yourself,for you have no idea what you are capable of.
永远不要低估自己,因为你不知道你的能力所限。
3. 以景结情结尾 ( Image Ending )