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1.使用非谓语动词形式, 句子凝练高端
①She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (非谓语动词)
→She walked out of the lab, followed by many students.
②They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (非谓语动词)
→They went back to school, singing and laughing.
2. 运用定语从句, 增加细节, 填补内容
①You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class(使你容易通过这门课).
②Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).
③I have found a flat for you on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese school. It is on the third floor with three rooms, one of which is bedroom(其中一个是卧室), and the other two are bathroom and kitchen.
3. 巧用倒装, 增强句子的表现力
①Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (倒装)
→Weak as/though I am, I’ll make the effort.
②He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (倒装)
→No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.
4. 恰当使用强调句, 增强说服力
①He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (强调句)
→It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.
②It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient. (强调句)
5. 自如应用各种名词性从句, 精彩纷呈
①To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (主语从句)
→What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
②I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon(我那天下午得参加一个重要会议).
6. with or without精彩点缀, 妙不可言
①As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim(没有清晰可达到的目标) is like sailing without a compass.
②I can’t thank you enough for your generous help, without which I couldn’t have made such great progress(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步).
7. 巧用副词, 充分表情达意
①She patiently(耐心地) explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow the