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先看下面这段续写文章，评价如何？ But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. So Jane found a high tree and climed on it slowly. She wanted to left this forest as quickly as possible. But she knew what she should do was have a safe sleep. So she found a big stick and used her yellow blouse to tie her with the stick. She was so tired that she fell asleep without minutes. In her dream, she knew she should not be angry with Tom. A story from a fellow student--Story Polishing Practise But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. So Jane found a high tree and climed on it slowly. She wanted to left this forest as quickly as possible. But she knew what she should do was have a safe sleep. So she found a big stick and used her yellow blouse to tie her with the stick. She was so tired that she fell asleep without minutes. In her dream, she knew she should not be angry with Tom. 衔接形式单一 句式结构单一 描写手法单一 Inner though Detailed verbs Proper adv 1.天黑了，他感到很害怕。 2.那个女孩看到那条吓人的蛇，感到很害怕。 3.有人敲门，他感到很害怕。 4.小时候，在黑暗中睡觉让我们感到很害怕。 5我感到很害怕，尖声呼救； 6一听到那个坏消息，她就忍不住哭了起来。 7听到那个坏消息，她的脸色变得苍白。 8当她听到那个坏消息之后，眼睛都哭肿了。 9我听到那个坏消息时感到十分震惊。 10他对那些无家可归的孩子充满了同情。 11听到她的死讯，他表示哀伤 12语言不能表达我的悲伤。 1 It's getting dark and he is frightened. 2 The girl was scared when she saw the scary snake 3 Someone knocked at the door and he felt afraid 4 When I was young, going to sleep in the dark terrified me. 5 I felt very scared and I screamed for help. 6 When she heard the bad news, she couldn't help crying out.  7 Her face went pale at the bad news.  8 After hearing the bad news, she cried out. 9 I was shocked when I heard the bad news. 10 Her heart ached for the homeless children.  11 He expressed his sorrow at the news of her death.  12 Words cannot express my sorrow.    实战演练： 因为常年没陪家人过圣诞节，今年圣诞节在家，妻子和孩子们玩的很高兴，我却.....(什么行为和感受) 深入思考： 作者是没收到礼物而伤心吗？ 还是因为别的？？ 记住：奥运冠军是在运动场上训练出来的 本节任务： 1.请同学们，先背诵笔记！10分钟 2. 再15分钟，实战演练。 3. 批阅。 1. 英语课开始了，老师要把批好的试卷发下来。在拿到试卷前，Tom紧张地要命，害怕自己考砸了。请设计Tom在拿到试卷前的内心活动。80词