内容正文:
八年级下册作文示范
Unit 10
作文题:
Dear Wang Wei,
How's everything going? Last weekend, we hold a yard sale clearing out many old things. Some of the old things remind me of my childhood. Do you still have a favorite thing from childhood? What is it? How long have you had it? How did you get it? Why do you like it so much? Can you tell me more about it? Please write to me soon.
Yours
Linda
1.审题,列提纲
写作内容:(1) the favorite thing (2) the time of getting it (3) the way I get it (4) the reasons why I like it (5) more information about it.
2.结构(三段)
第一段:介绍童年时期喜爱物品的相关情况
(1)我童年时期最喜欢的东西是一个玩具熊。(My favorite thing from childhood is....)
My favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear.
(2)我拥有它已经八年了。(have had...for/since...)
I have had it for six years.
(3)我的好朋友Tina在我8岁生日时送给我的。
My best friend Tina gave it to me as a gift on my eighth birthday.
第二段:介绍喜欢的理由
如何介绍喜爱的理由:物品的样子,特别的意义
(4)我喜欢它的原因之一是它很可爱和漂亮。(one of the reasons why ... is that...)
One of the reasons why I love it is that it is so cute and beautiful.
(5)它全身是棕色的,有着大大的蓝眼睛和小小的耳朵。
It is brown with two big blue eyes and small ears.
(6)它对我来说很特别是因为它是我和Tina之间友谊的象征。(a symbol of...)
It is special to me because it's a symbol of the relationship between Tina and me.
(7)每一次看见它,它总是能勾起我们之间美好的回忆。(remind me of...)
Whenever I see it, it can always remind me of the sweet memories.
第三段:谈论更多关于该物品的信息。
(1)还记得我第一次收到这只玩具熊的时候。
I remember when I first received the toy bear.
(2)那天放学我惊讶地发现我的桌子里有一个盒子,上面放着一张卡片,写着“我最好的朋友,祝你生日快乐!”。(be surprised to do.)
After school, I was surprised to find that there was a box in my desk on which there was a card saying "Happy Birthday, my best friend!"
(3) 一打开盒子,我就知道是Tina送的,因为我曾经跟她说过喜欢小熊玩具。(As soon as...)
As soon as I opened the box, I knew it was from Tina. I told her that I love toy bear very much.
(4)我很感动,因为她总是能把我说的话记在心里。(be moved by...)
I was deeply moved by her, because she can always remember what I said.
(5)多么有意义的一件礼物啊!
What a meaningful gift!
3.成文
Dear Linda.
My favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for six