内容正文:
专题15 书面表达精练精析10篇
2022-2023学年八年级英语下册新课标(核心素养)期末复习冲击满分系列
(一)
假如你是一名中学生,你有许多爱好,你可以选出两种爱好介绍给同学们,例如,你喜欢写作,你想成为一名像莫言的著名的作家,说说写作给你的好处,另外你还喜欢旅游,旅游给你的好处,向大家介绍介绍。可适当发挥。内容包括:
(1)share with, successful, Mo Yan, come out, relaxed, pleasure, success
(2)travelling, experience different life, cultures in different countries.
(3)your feelings about hobbies.
作文要求:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
My hobbies
Hello, everyone! Everyone has hobbies and dreams. Now let share my hobbies with you.
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【答案】
My hobbies
Hello everyone! Everyone has hobbies and dreams. Now let me share my hobbies with you. My hobby is writing. I want to be a successful writer in the future just like Mo Yan. My story came out as a book in 2012. So I think writing makes me relaxed and it also brings me pleasure and success. I also like traveling best. I am looking forward to traveling abroad so I want to be a guide in the foreign countries. In this way, I can experience different life and learn about different cultures in different countries.
These are my hobbies. Do you like them?
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体介绍要分享自己的爱好;
第二步,具体介绍自己的不同的爱好;
第三步,最后这些就是自己的爱好。
[亮点词汇]
① come out出版
② look forward to盼望
③ make sb+adj使某人……
[高分句型]
① Now let me share my hobbies with you.(祈