内容正文:
Write a speech
sunny
How can music help us and change our life?
Warm up
Touch our soul
Release our pressure
Bring us happiness
Give us courage and power
Keep us company
What is the girl doing in the picture? Guess.
Music changes her life
What’s the type of this passage?
Warm up
A speech
What should be mentioned at the beginning of this passage?
Greetings, self introduction and topic
para1
1. What’s sarah’s problem? How did she feel?
Read for the details
A serious disease which was difficult to cure
2. How did music help her during her difficult time?
Afraid/alone/discouraged
The song “happy” made her feel better and help her recover
Music is the medicine of mind.
Para2&3
Read for the details
1. What did music bring to sarah?
Give me happiness---spirits fly like a kite in my mind
Give me strength and brought me relief---
it was the rock I leant on to become strong
Give me hope and a sense of satisfaction—
like friend speak words of encouragement
2.Why did writer show her personal experience?
Make the speech more sincere and touching
Para2&3
Read for the details
Para4
2. What’s her advice to others?
Treasure music and make it a part of one’s life.
1. What should be mentioned at the end of this speech?
Advice/hopes
Read for the structures
para1
Greetings+introduction+topic
beginning
para2
Problem: disease
Solution: music
story
para3
benefits
feelings
body
para4
Hope+advice
closing
Appropriate structure makes the speech smooth, logical and coherent.
Read for the language features
Besides clear structure, what makes the speech successful?
Give me happiness---spirits fly like a kite in my mind
Give me strength and brought me relief---
it was the rock I leant on to become strong
Give me hope and a sense of satisfaction—
like friend speak words of encouragement
We can know speaker’s emotion. repetiti