2023年广东省深圳市中考英语书面表达建议类写作课件

2023.04 广东深圳校考 与父母沟通 建议类01 Topic A Great Passage Genre(体裁) Tense(时态) Personal Pronoun(人称) Main Points(要点) Paragraph(段落) 最近有不少同学写信到学校心灵驿站，哭诉自己和父母相处不融洽，甚至产生了很多矛盾。假设你是李华，请你投稿写一封回信，分享你与父母有效沟通的策略，帮助同学们排忧解难。 要点： 1.表达你的理解和安慰。 2.有效亲子沟通的重要性。 3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。 要求： 1.80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.标点正确，书面整洁。 4.行文连贯，条理清楚。 Dear fellows, I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble getting along well with your parents. ... I hope my advice can be helpful to you. 最近有不少同学写信到学校心灵驿站，哭诉自己和父母相处不融洽，甚至 产生了很多矛盾。假设你是李华，请你投稿写一封回信，分享你与父母有效 沟通的策略，帮助同学们排忧解难。 要点： 1.表达你的理解和安慰。 2.有效亲子沟通的重要性。 3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。 要求： 1.80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.标点正确，书面整洁。 4.行文连贯，条理清楚。 Step 1 审题：体裁、时态、人称 体裁:建议类书信 时态：一般现在时 人称：第一人称，第二人称 Possible version: Dear fellows， I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along well with parents. I can deeply feel how upset you are. I cannot emphasize the importance of parent-child communication. With good communication, you can not only get along well with parents, but also focus more on study. Here are some methods that can help you deal with the problem. First and foremost, it’s no use getting angry in different opinions. Therefore, when faced with disagreement, calming down is the first step. What’s more, it’s of great importance to spend time having meaningful talks with parents. It’s a good way to share what has happened and how you feel with each other. More importantly, you’re supposed to listen to parents carefully and sincerely. At the same time, you should try your best to have a good understanding of parents. To sum up, only by showing great respect to one another can you keep a good relationship with parents. I hope my advice can be helpful to you. Li Hua 2023.02 三十校联考 处理闲置校服 建议类02 假设你是李华，你的网友张君给你写了一封信。信中说他和他的同学有一个困扰。 他们即将毕业，有很多校服不知道该怎么处理，想向你寻求建议。请你根据以下几 点提示给他回信，并至少补充一条建议。要点：1. 将闲置的校服放在二手网站上售卖；2. 将校服清洗后，送给亲戚朋友；3. 在校园开展校服回收活动，将衣服捐给贫困地区的孩子；4.......参考词汇: second-hand website; donate(捐