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X3U2 HEALTHY LIFESTYLE
Using language
Facing the terrible lifestyle,what will you do?
Leading in
Leading in
What is your ideal lifestyle? How is it different, compared with your current lifestyle?
get up at 6:30 am
do exercise for 20 minutes
get to school
...
My ideal lifestyle
My current lifestyle
VS
Reading for structure
What is the writing style of these two passages?
These are two _________ from _______and_________to
the editor to inform the editor of their_________, _________, ___________and___________.
Wang Lu
George
problems
decisions
actions
results
Problem
Decision
Action(s)
Result(s)
Problem
Decision
Action(s)
Result(s)
letters
Reading for details
well
sleep and dizzy
passion
flu easily
many toothaches
eat no sugar
exercise regularly
buying sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks
at least 30
minutes and did something active
dynamic and stronger
both body and mind
soundly
suffers from flu
or toothaches
in control of her own life
Reading for details
stressed out
worn out
playing computer games
take control of his life and
find other ways to relax
rock climbing monthly with
his dad
energetic
change himself for the better
Reading for details
Past tense
Present tense
1. Brainstorm with your partner.
What lifestyle habit you would like to change
Why you want to change
How you plan to change
What result you hope to see
2. Draft your letter to the editor based on the mind map.
Pre-writing
Pre-writing
A letter
Problems
Decision
Results
Actions
Pre-writing
Connectors
Point of view
Listing
Cause&
effect
Giving example
Restating
Summary
1. in my opinion
2. as far as I know/am concerned
1. to begin with
2. what’s more
1. thus
2. as a result
1. for instance
2. for example
1. in other words
2. that is to say
1. all in all
2. in summary/conclusion
Please write a letter of suggestion to the editor
Tense
(Past tense+Present tense)
10
Post-writing
Homework
1. Revise your draft.
2. Explore the habit problems of your peers and virtual