读后续写Forgiveness讲解课件-2023届高三英语二轮专题

作文讲评课 -- 基于思维导图的“Read”教学模式在读后续写中的应用 By Maggie 2023/3/15 Teaching Focus 1. 二次阅读深度思考 R； 2. 同伴互评 E； 3. 展示点评（comments）； 4. 作文赏析 A 5. 语言打磨（polish） D 3 课前扫盲（翻译单词、短语、句子） 1. copy-book __________ 2. jog __________ 3. displease__________ 4. spoil __________ Phrases: 1. out of envy _____________ 2. in the wrong _____________ 3. now that _____________ 4. flush with anger _____________ 5. simmer away _____________ 6. more sad than angry ____________ 字帖 轻碰；慢跑 使某人不愉快；惹怒 糟蹋；损坏；宠坏 出于嫉妒 有错误 既然 气得脸红 悲伤多于愤怒 愤怒逐渐平息 My anger had simmered away. I regretted. 课前扫盲（翻译单词、短语、句子） Sentences 1. Coretti could not have done it intentionally. 2. If only I had not said that word to him! 3. If you are wronged, defend yourself, but do not fight. 4. I saw his coat ripped on the shoulder－he had carried too much wood. Coretti 不可能是故意那样做的。could+have done 对过去发生事情的猜测。 要是我没有那样说该多好！ 虚拟语气 如果你被冤枉了，要防御而不是战斗。 我看到他肩膀处的衣服裂开了---他之前扛太多木材了。 Forgiveness It was not out ofenvy, because he got the prize and I did not, that I quarrelled with Coretti this morning.Still I was in the wrong. He sat beside me, and I was writing in my copy-book when hejogged (轻碰) my elbow and made me blot(涂污). I got angry, and said a rude word to him. He replied with a smile,"I did not do it on purpose.” It displeased me that he smiled, and I thought:"Oh! Now that he has had a prize he has grown overproud!" Alittle while afterwards, I gave him ajog which made him spoil his page. Then, Coretti's face flushed with anger,“You did that on purpose," he said to me, and raised his hand. The teacher sawit; he drew it back. But he added:“I shall wait for you outside!” I felt upset; my anger had simmered away. I regretted. Coretti could not have done it intentionally. He was good. I recalled how he had worked a