书面表达范文三：关于写某人的改变2022-2023学年人教版英语九年级全册

人教版英语九年级全册书面表达范文（二） 话题一：关于写人或物的改变 关于人物或事物的改变，一直以来都是书面表达常考的话题，接下来我们就以以下几篇范文为例，简单的说一说这类文章的突破方法。 第一篇： 请根据下面表格的提示，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Hometown”的英语书面表达。 要求： 1、紧扣主题，思路清晰，语意连贯，可适当发挥。 2、120词左右（开头已写出，不计入总词数）。 3、提示词：used to ... \ in the past \ there be句型...... In the past At present old houses(small,dark) … tall buildings(supermarket ,hospital , bank ,hotel , restaurant ), … dirty river, polluted air, … clean river, fresh air, … walk, ride bikes, … take buses, underground, high-speed railways; drive cars; … 参考范文： Changes in Our Hometown Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, the houses in our hometown were very small and dark. People in the family have to share the room. But now, there are more and more tall buildings in the town. People have moved into tall buildings. Everyone in the family have their own room and they are big and bright. Besides , there are also supermarkets , hospital , bank , hotel and restaurant around the house, it is very convenient. One of the biggest change of my hometown is that the improvement of the environment. In the past , the water in the rivers were very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.Sometimes , you can even see the fish under the water. Besides , there are other changes for people about going out. People used to go to work on foot or by bike, but now they can take buses, take buses, take high-speed railways or drive their own cars to go to work.关于该范文的一些说明： 第一段——总括句，交代家乡十年来的变化。注意现在完成时的正确运用，可以积累该句子。 第二段——根据提示要点，通过对比写出家乡的变化，注意时态的正确应用——一般现在时和一般过去时。 第三段——提示要点二，通过对比写出家乡变化，注意时态的正确运用以及句子积累。 第四段——提示要点三，通过对比写出家乡变化，注意句子积累。 举一反三：练习题 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Emily给你发来一封电子邮件，询问你家乡近五年的变化。请你根据下面的要点提示给她回复邮件，简单介绍你家乡发生的变化。 要点提示： 1. 环境方面； 2. 交通方式方面； 3. 休闲方式方面。 要求： 内容应包括所有的要点提示； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 3. 词数：不少于120，电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear Emily, I’m glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past five years. Here are some changes. __________