内容正文:
英语作文小透明的华丽转身
应用文写作主要考查考生在实际生活情景下运用英语传达信息、表达观点的能力。英语写作水平的提高并非一蹴而就,只有勤背诵,多积累,常练笔,才是练就写作高手的不二法门。目前,很多考生的作文都处于三档水平,好一点的处于四档水平,从高考阅卷情况来看,这两个档次的考生人数也最多。短期内,如何让你的作文由三档升级到五档呢?首先不管什么文体,我们要保证文章结构清晰明确,请参考下汉堡图,我们的应用文一般就是这样的汉堡结构。
Conclusion/wishes/ending
确定一个主要点,适当进行延伸,并不是每个要点都需要延伸
Extension 拓展延伸
Extension 拓展延伸
Extension 拓展延伸
point 3
point 2
point 1
Background/purpose
结构清晰了,我们再来探究内容,主要从高级词汇和增分句型来探讨。
策略一:词中天花板---巧妙运用高级词汇
1.方法一 “喜新厌旧”。同样一个单词,我们要用最能体现我们英语水平的高级词汇,而不是用初中学过的单词来表达。单词要追求高配,不要平替。同时,如果同样的意义重复出现,要使用不同的表达方式。
读例句品差异:
1)Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only make up(占比....) 18% and 12% respectively .(2022·全国乙卷)
升级为→ Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only account for 18% and 12% respectively .
2) It was set up to raise awareness of protecting the oceans , which play an important part in(在......起重要作用) global ecosystem .(2022·全国甲卷)
升级为→ It was set up to enhance/promote/strengthen awareness of protecting the oceans , which play a significant / crucial /vital / irreplaceable part /role in(在......起深远的/关键的/必不可少的/ 无可替代的作用) global ecosystem .
3)With the wide spread of(随着...的传播) the Internet , more and more people become online learners .(2021·全国乙卷)
升级为→ With the incredible/intensive/extreme popularity of(随着...的极度流行) the Internet , an increasing number of (越来越多的....)people become online learners .
2.方法二 妙用短语恰当使用短语不仅能增加词数,还能使文章内容更丰富,更有可读性。
读例句品差异:
1)I believe that your arrival will be important to our show .(2022·新高考]卷)
升级为→ I hold the firm belief that your arrival will be of great significance to our show .
2) However , from my point of view , what benefits students most is reading English books , for it can help students understand English better .(2022·全国乙卷)
升级为→ However , from my point of view , what benefits students most is reading English books , for it can help students gain a better/deeper understanding of English .
3)As is shown by the figures of the chart , thanks to modern technology , many