读后续写解题技巧课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习

读后续写经验分享 分享人：杨婷 2020级 1 01 02 03 04 CONTENTS 读懂原文 构思框架 展开续写 评价方式 2 记叙内容 5W1H 中心主题 人物关系 情绪变化 时空变化 读人物 读文本大意 读结构 Main Idea Who what when where why how 主要人物关系，经历，情绪起伏 人物思想感情，描述角度，事情发展阶段等 读懂原文:人物时态和事件，语言特色不要变 为续写结尾主题升华奠定基础 3 二框二首正能量 第二段首句与文本主题结合，加上正能量结局 两段首句定一框 结合文本已有信息和所给的第一段首句，所给第二段首句是为了限定第一段的结尾，平时可带学生练习衔接句写作 构思框架 4 所思 所见 动作描写 增加细节 展开续写 所闻，所说 所做 心理活动描写 语言描写 环境描写 人物描写 5 句式一 句式二 情绪描写之无灵主语 (a burst/wave/surge/sense/feeling of +)表情感状态的名词+有灵动词+sb. 表“某人感到...” 或“一阵/一种...向某人袭来”。 表示身体部位/音容笑的名词+有灵动词 6 Fear Anger Joy Disgust Sadness She was so sad that she burst into crying. She was standing by the door, crying sadly. Please make a sentence to describe how Zhen Huan felt. She was so angry that she couldn’t help shouting. She was shouting at Maruko angrily. Please make a sentence to describe how Maruko’s mother felt. Suffering and despair defeated her, and she fell sobbing by the door. 痛苦和绝望击垮了她，她靠在门上哭泣。 Maruko’s mother felt that a wave of anger swept over her. 小丸子的妈妈感到一阵愤怒。 She was so sad that she burst into crying. She was standing by the door, crying sadly. Suffering and despair defeated her, and she fell sobbing by the door. She was so angry that she couldn’t help shouting. She was shouting at Maruko angrily. Maruko’s mother felt that a wave of anger swept over her. “无灵”主语句 情绪名词拟人化 运用“无灵”主语句，突出人物的心理、情感，使续写语言更加生动形象、栩栩如生。 句式① (a burst/wave/surge/sense/feeling of +)表情感状态的名词+有灵动词+sb. 表“某人感到...” 或“一阵/一种...向某人袭来”。 Suffering and despair defeated her. A wave of anger swept over Maruko’s mother. “无灵”主语句 Check your answers 情绪 名词 情绪 名词 高兴 后悔 激动、兴奋 焦虑不安 惊讶、震惊 厌烦 失望 孤独 伤心 痛苦 惊慌失措 沮丧 害怕、恐惧 困惑 绝望 恶心 担心、担忧 生气 内疚 宽慰 happiness excitement surprise disappointment sadness panic scare despair worry guilt regret anxiety boredom loneliness suffering depression confusion disgust anger relief 袭来： sweep/flood/rush over 击垮： defeat get the better of 掠过： flash/ cross 把...撕碎： tear...into pieces 吞噬；淹没： swallow “有灵” 动词 抓住： seize get/take hold of 使失望；有负于： fail