读后续写练习课件 发动社区的邻居加入到改造社区的活动中来 -2023届高三英语二轮复习

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 发动社区的邻居加入到改造社区的活动中来 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Maggie and Alex live in a tall building in a neighborhood in the center of the city. There are no trees near their building, but they are happy in their home and it is close to their jobs. In the part of the city where they live, there is not much fresh food to buy. The stores only have processed foods in packages. Maggie and Alex and all the other people in the building have to eat food that they buy in boxes and plastic containers. This makes so much garbage that no one knows where to put it. While they wait for Fridays, when the city collects the garbage, all the neighbors put their trash into bags and sometimes leave it in the hallway or on the big, sunny roof. The whole building looks terrible. No one can spend time playing on the roof because it is full of trash. 4 4 续写原文 One day, Maggie and Alex decide to make a change. They go up to the roof and separate all the recycla-ble garbage, like cardboard, plastic bottles, glass, and aluminum cans. Then they take all of the garbage down to the street for the garbage collectors. But they do not carry down the plastic bottles! They cut off the tops and use them as pots to plant tomatoes and carrots. They plant herbs, too. 5 5 段首句 Para 1：Maggie and Alex tell their neighbors about their project. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Para 2：Now the roof looks beautiful like a garden. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Maggie和Alex对所居住社区所作出的绿色改变，并且让整个社区都从中受益。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1：Maggie and Alex tell their neighbors about their project. 由第一段首句内容“麦琪和亚历克斯把他们的计划告诉了邻居。”可知，第一段可描写邻居知道他们的计划后，很高兴，并且参与到他们的计划中去。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：Now the roof looks beautiful like a garden. 由第二段首句内容“现在屋顶看起来像花园一样漂亮。”可知，第二段可描写Maggie和Alex以及他们的邻居享受这个被改变的环境，以及注意去保护环境。 11 11 续写思路分析 续写线索 发现环境很差——决定改变——邻居参与——享受新环境 12 12 续写素材 可用词汇： 行为类 ①变得：get/become ②照顾：take c