Unit 6 Writing - Stay safe with electricity(含范文及错误评讲)课件 2022-2023学年沪教牛津版（广州沈阳通用）七年级英语下册

Writing Stay safe with electricity Writing Stay safe with electricity 1 safety first 2 Why is it important to stay safe with electricity? 3 4 Electricity can be dangerous or even deadly. 5 How to stay safe with electricity? 6 Any ideas? 7 Let’s watch a video 8 9 Do’s and don’ts 10 Do’s and don’ts place your drinks away from … 11 Do’s and don’ts heater (加热器) / oven（烤箱） 12 Do’s and don’ts plug (插头), * outlet (插座), metal (金属的) 13 Do’s and don’ts * socket (插座), * charge (v. 充电), charger 14 Do’s and don’ts 15 Do’s and don’ts broken wires（断了的电线） 16 Structure Introduction 电的重要性/ 安全用电的重要性/ 不注意安全用电的后果（反面论述） Body 安全用电的原则（rules）/ 注意事项 Ending 17 Requirements 不少于80词。 有完整开头+主体+结尾。 主体段尽可能用中心句/总括句 + 支撑/解释句。 4. 条理清晰，适当使用逻辑关系词。 5. 不要抄MP文章。 18 Requirements 不少于80词。 有完整开头+主体+结尾。 主体段尽可能用中心句/总括句 + 支撑/解释句。 4. 条理清晰，适当使用逻辑关系词。 5. 不要抄MP文章。 19 Writing feedback 20 21 ⭕️ Electricity is very important in our daily life. life改为复数lives（n. 生活） Electricity makes our lives more easier. 去掉more Everyone use electricity everyday. 不定代词everyone后用动词三单，use改为uses。everyday改为every day Electricity can be danger. danger为名词，改为形容词dangerous Electricity can make fire. make fire表“生火”，改为start a fire Use electricity safe is very important. Use改为To use，safe改为safely △ It maybe start a fire. maybe多放句首，改为may If there are broken wires, you must to change them. ☆ Remember turn off the heaters when you don’t use them. Let’s stay safety with electricity. Error correction 点击添加相关标题文字 22 Electricity makes our lives more convenient. It powers our homes, computers, phones, and more. However, electricity can also be dangerous and even deadly. Here I will share some important dos and don’ts of electricity safety with you. To begin with, always remember that water and electricity don’t go well together. So, keep your electrical appliances away from water, and don’t touch any switches with wet hands. Besides, turn off the heaters and ovens when you are not around, or they may start a fire. Lastly,