读后续写之微技能课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项

Continuation Writing -- 1 微技能之句式升级 2 句式升级 写句子时，是否有以下困惑？ 1.句子简单 2.无话可说 3.语言苍白无力 4.无法得到阅卷老师青睐。 句式升级 The girl unwrapped her gift box. 这个女孩打开了礼盒 第一招：加形容词、副词 1.The ________________ girl unwrapped her ________________ gift box. 2.___________________________,the girl unwrapped her gift box. 3.___________________________,the girl unwrapped her gift box. innocent delicate Curious and excited Full of joy 句式升级 The girl unwrapped her gift box. 这个女孩打开了礼盒 第二招：加介词短语 1.___________________________,the girl unwrapped her gift box. (毫不犹豫地) 2.___________________________,the girl unwrapped her gift box. （惊讶地） Without any hesitation In surprise 句式升级 The girl unwrapped her gift box. 这个女孩打开了礼盒 第三招：加非谓语动词 Screaming with excitement,the girl unwrapped her gift box. The girl,screaming with excitement,unwrapped her gift box. The girl unwrapped her gift box, screaming with excitement. 那女孩兴奋地尖叫着，打开了她的礼品盒。 句式升级 The girl unwrapped her gift box. 这个女孩打开了礼盒 第四招：加with复合或独立主格 1.________________________________,the girl unwrapped her gift box. (那女孩张大了嘴巴，打开了她的礼盒。) 2.__________________________________,the girl unwrapped her gift box. （女孩的心狂跳着，打开她的礼盒。） With her mouth wide open With her heart beating wildly Her mouth wide open， Her heart beating wildly, 句式升级 The girl unwrapped her gift box. 这个女孩打开了礼盒 第五招：加定语从句 1.The girl unwrapped her gift box ________________________________. (女孩打开了她一直期待的礼品盒。) 2.The girl unwrapped her gift box _____________________________ （那女孩打开了她用红丝带系好的礼品盒。） which she had been looking forward to which was tied with red ribbon. summary 第一招：加形容词、副词 第二招：加介词短语 第三招：加非谓语动词 第四招：加with复合或独立主格 第五招：加定语从句 Our headteacher walked into the classroom. 班主任走进了教室 Angry and disappointed,our headteacher walked into the noisy classroom quickly. Angry and disappointed,our headteacher walked into the classroom quickly, in which all boys and girls were talking loudly. Our headteacher walked into the classroom. 班主任走进了教室 $