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【写作宝典】2023年小升初英语写作专项复习 话题九
外研版三起
话题九:如何描述人物从过去到现在的变化
[写作素材]时光飞逝.WuBinbin记录了成长过程中的各种变化。请根据照片帮他完成成长记录册,并仿照范例,结合自身实际,写一写你的变化。
可参考图片信息及词汇。
第6小题至少写五句哦,如果能多写几句就更好了!书写规范、整洁。
How time flies! I changed a lot. I was short before. And I couldn't ride a bike. Now I am taller.I often go cycling on weekends. Last weekend I 1._____________with my friend in the park. So much fun!
This is my English teacher.Before, she had long hair. But she has a 2.______________now. She is so beautiful.John is my best friend.He is from the USA. He didn't like speaking Chinese before.But now he speaks Chinese well.He likes doing kung fu. He thinks China is amazing!
Last month, my family moved into a new house. It is bigger than my old house. We have six rooms
now. There was no study before.But now we have one. Before, there were only two 3.____________.
But now there are three. I like my new home.
How time flies! Before, I was 4.______________.Now I am 5._____________.6._______________
审题要点:
· 审人称:第一人称
· 审时态:一般过去时 一般现在时
· 审要点:用一般过去时描述过去的情况,用一般现在时描述现在的情形。句子数量要求。
· 理思路:
开头总起下文→介绍人物的身份、年龄等→This is my...He's/She's...years old now.
中间主体部分→介绍他/她过去在学习、工作以及生活方面的相关情况,如从事的职业、工作地点、学习状态等,该题必须介绍图片提示的自己以前和现在的主要变化,外貌特征,兴趣爱好,能力等等→...years ago, he/she was a/an.... He/She worked/studied in/at.... He/She learnt... Before I was....Now I am.... I liked .....I could/couldn’t ....Now I like... I can ....
结尾总结全文→介绍他/她现阶段的生活情况,如正在学习哪些技能、有哪些兴趣爱好等→He/She doesn’t work now. He/She works in/at...now He/She is learning.. He/She likes... I c