【写作宝典】2023年小升初英语写作专项复习 话题八 外研版三起

【写作宝典】2023年小升初英语写作专项复习 话题八 外研版三起 话题八：介绍人物的生平事迹 [写作素材]2021年10月16日,神舟十三号载人飞船发射成功。翟志刚、王亚平、叶光富三位英雄航天员进行了长达六个月的太空生活。他们在太空中做了很多有意义的事情,请以“Great Astronauts”为题,对他们的经历做一个简单的介绍。 参考词汇：stay in the space for 6 months; do a lot of things there; walk outside the spaceship; do sports;do experiments(做实验); give lessons to the students; work so hard; be so great ... (1)书写规范,注意大小写和标点符号;表达正确,语句通顺,行文连贯。 (2)短文可参考提供的内容,也可根据自己的了解进行拓展,写作时对动词的形式需作适当的变化，建议用一般过去时。 (3)短文不少于5句话。 审题要点： · 审人称：第三人称 · 审时态：一般过去时 · 审要点：介绍人物的出生地点、出生时间、讲述过去的生平事迹,采用一般过去时 · 理思路： 开头总起下文→开门见山交代时间地点人物→Last year, on October 16th,..... 中间主体部分→详细介绍人物的主要事迹→stay in the space for 6 months; do a lot of things there; walk outside the spaceship; do sports;do experiments(做实验); give lessons to the students; work so hard; 结尾总结全文→表明情感→be so great ...my role model! I should learn from them. Great Taikonauts On October 16th 2021,three Chinese taikonauts, Zhai Zhigang, Wang Yaping and Ye Guangfu, took ShenzhouⅩⅢ to space successfully. [范文参考] Great Taikonauts On October 16th 2021 three Chinese taikonauts, Zhai Zhigang, Wang Yaping and Ye Guangfu, took ShenzhouⅩⅢ to space successfully. They stayed in the space for 6 months and did a lot of things there.They walked outside the spaceship. And they did sports to keep healthy. They did experiments and gave lessons to the students. The lessons were very interesting. They worked so hard. They are so great.I want to f