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【写作宝典】2023年小升初英语写作专项复习 话题六
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话题六:表达自己对朋友的美好祝愿
[写作素材]时间飞近,孩子们马上就要小学毕业。小学生活的点点滴滴即将成为过去,但也会留在大家心里某个角落。假设你是兰兰,请你在好朋友Lucy的纪念册上写下你的留言,以表达你对她的不舍与祝福。
参考词汇:say goodbye to…., enjoyed our time, good luck, for the future, best wishes, wishing,happiness, miss...
审题要点:
· 审人称:第一人称
· 审时态:一般将来时 一般过去时
· 审要点:告别与祝福 留言的格式
· 理思路:
开头总起下文→简单介绍或评价一下好朋友→You're a... boy/girl. You're my best friend.
中间主体部分→向好朋友表达感谢或对一起相处的时光表示不舍 → I enjoyed our time together.You helped me in... You taught me... You brought me/us lots of joy. 结尾总结全文→表达对好朋友美好的祝愿→Good luck for the future. Wishing you happiness every day.
Lanlan
13 years old
China
Dear Lucy,
Lanlan
[范文参考]
Lanlan
13 years old
China
Dear Lucy,
You are a wonderful friend. I learnt a lot from you. I enjoyed our time together. I’ll never forget. You helped me in English. Thank you very much. We’re going to say goodbye to our primary school soon. And in September we are going to start middle school. I hope we can still study in the same school.We will always be friends.
Good luck for the future!
Lanlan
[素材积累]
形容词: naughty淘气的 lovely 可爱的 wonderful了不起的,出色的 happy 快乐的 interesting有趣的 fantastic 极好的
祝福语: Good luck to you!祝你好运!Good luck for the future.(祝你)未来有好运。
Best wishes to you!给你最美好的祝愿!Wishing you happiness every day.祝你幸福每一天。
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